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Creating Unforgettable Characters

At some point in time, I think at a writers conference in Kansas City in 2007, I picked up a used copy of Creating Unforgettable Characters by Linda Seger [Henry Holt, 1990]. I figured it would be an easy read at 221 pages. But it just bubbled up to the top of my reading pile in early December.

Actually, it wasn’t on my reading pile. That is a mixture of fiction and non-fiction for pleasure reading or self-improvement/education about things other than writing. I have a separate stash of writing books, not really in a pile, not really sorted as to which to read next.

I had just finished several reading pile books in a row, decided it was time to read a writing craft book, and this one looked good. The age of the book didn’t seems to be a problem to me as I started.

Seger consults with script writers and film makers, and so many of her examples of character development were from those areas. She made frequent use of television programs I never watched (such as Murphy Brown) and movies I never saw. It was kind of hard to understand her description of a character when I had no clue about that character.

Segar’s book is divided into the following chapters.

  • Research
  • Character Consistencies and Paradoxes
  • Creating Back Story
  • Character Psychology
  • Character Relationships
  • Supporting and Minor Characters
  • Dialogue
  • Nonrealistic Characters
  • Beyond Stereotyping
  • Solving Character Problems

I have not previously read a book about characters, but I’ve read a lot about it in magazines and on-line forums, and sat through several classes at writers conferences about character development. The advice in this book pretty much matched what I’ve heard/read elsewhere. Characters need to be multi-dimensional. Heroes need to have flaws; villains need to have virtues. Characters need to act consistently, but not so consistently that they seem to be made out of cardboard.

Paradoxes are good. The woman who loves football. The man who makes floral arrangements. The woman psychologist who follows boxing. The thug kid who’s an A student. These all make characters seem more real.

I liked what Seger wrote about researching a character, and about creating back story. These are probably two things that writers (me included) probably fall short in most easily. She gave me some things to consider in these two areas.

I had in mind to write more, but must end now as I have much else to do tonight. I’m glad I read this book at this point in time. While perhaps a newer book would be more advisable, if a writer should have a chance to pick this up, you might as well and glean from it what you can.

Current Writing Projects

I recently finished a writing craft book, Creating Unforgettable Characters. I want to make a couple of posts about lessons learned, but am finding difficulty getting to it. I’m working on two or three other projects, which have caused me to either change direction in my blogs or neglect them for a while.

One of these projects is working on Doctor Luke’s Assistant. After letting it sit for a couple of years, except for pitching it at the conference last June, I have decided to e-self-publish it. What the heck, so what if it doesn’t sell? It will be out there. I’m going to have to pay for a cover for this one, probably around $100 or so (I suspect more, but that’s the estimate). I’d like to get it published by February 2012. I did another reading of it and last round of edits, which have now been typed. At any time I can begin making the e-book file. Since this is a long book (155,000 words), I’ll probably list it for $4.99.

The other thing I’ve been doing is working on edits for In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. This is based on initial beta reader comments, as well as some plot elements I thought of that didn’t seem quite right. I hope to work on this a little tonight. Assuming I eSP this, I hope to have it published by March 2012.

And, I’m working on a short story—a sequel, I suppose you could call it—to my short story “Mom’s Letter”. I may have mentioned this before; in fact I’m fairly sure I have. Tentatively titled “Too Old To Play”, I hope to have it ready to eSP in early January 2012. In fact, I hope to complete the story tonight, proof it in the next day or two, and build the eSP files by the weekend. I’ll be meeting with the cover designer (my son) over Christmas, and hope to have the cover “in hand” before the end of the year.

That’s where I’m at, writing-wise. I hope to be a little more regular on this blog and on An Arrow Through the Air, at least for the next week.

2011 Book Sales to Date

A couple of days ago I said I was going to post a graph of my book sales. I finally uploded all sales to my spreadsheet, and corrected an equation or two. So here’s the graph. My best month for sales was July, and my best month for royalties was November. December is young. I still hope for additional sales and royalites.

Experimenting with Price

E-self-publishing guru Joe Konrath recently had a guest post on his blog, by Elle Lothlorien, concerning pricing for self-published e-books. Elle recommends higher prices for self-published e-books than has been the conventional wisdom in the community. Joe has recommended $2.99; Elle recommends closer to $4.99. Joe responded by saying he’s starting to agree with that sentiment, and is raising some of his prices accordingly. The comments to the post seem to favor the higher prices.

But at a higher price, won’t they sell fewer books? Maybe. But people, i.e. Americans, also have a perception about price and value being linked. Something that is terribly inexpensive, well below the going value, will be seen to be cheap and thought to be of a lesser quality. Think yard sales and thrift shops. While some good quality bargains can be had, these generally have heavily used merchandise of inferior quality. You’ll find better stuff at consignment shops, but still not of the quality as at stores that sell new stuff.

So I began thinking about the price of Documenting America. I initially set it at $1.25, as an introductory price, thinking if sales took off I could raise it some. It’s not a long book at 196 pages, so I wanted to keep the price attractive. Why then $1.25 and not $0.99? Only because those .99 prices always seem cheesy to me, gimicky. I’d rather pay $1.00 than $0.99. So I set the price at $1.25. But when I listed the book on Smashwords, they only allow prices that end in $0.99. Since Amazon doesn’t allow you to list it for less at any other place, I set the Smashwords price at $1.99. At that price I have one sale, via the Barnes & Noble Nook store.

Several people have told me that the book was way under-priced at $1.25, suggesting something like $3.99 would be better. The print version sells for $10.00, which will net me $0.58 per sale at Amazon, about $2.58 at CreateSpace, and almost $4.00 on self-sales. So I pondered whether I should raise my price, despite lack of sales.

Today I decided to raise the price. Although I don’t like x.99 pricing, if people expect that, I’ll give it to them. So the new price of Documenting America is now $1.99—or it will be as soon as it makes its way through the Kindle approval system.

Now, I’m not naive enough to think that a simple price chage, especially an increase, will suddenly spur sales. But maybe some people looked at the lower price and said, “I’m not buying something that cheap,” or “That guy must be desperate for sales.”  $1.99 doesn’t imply much more value than does $1.25. It is, however, a more expected price in the American market. “Meet expectations” is a good marketing mantra, I think. We’ll see what happens.

Tomorrow I’m going to post my sales graph and let the world see how little I’ve sold and how little I make.

Let the Promotion Continue

I don’t like it, but I’m doing it. Promotion, that is. Of Documenting America. I describes some of my efforts in my last post, and the difficulty I’m having accepting the unnatural role of promoter.

Today I took another small step. On the way to my writers group I stopped by the Bentonville Public LIbrary and gave them a copy of the book. Thus it is out before the public now—or will be as soon as they log it in, categorize it as to Dewey Decimal numbers, and get it on the shelf. I suppose I’ll go there in about a week and see if I can find it in the catalogue and on the shelf, or better yet, learn it’s been checked out.

One other piece of promotion shows some hope, if not yet sales. I sent a notice to the URI alumni magazine to go in the Class Notes section. One of the staffers e-mailed me, saying that they thought an engineer with literary aspirations was an interesting story, that they’d like to do a feature story on me for the spring issue, and that a certain freelancer will contact me.

Will this actually happen? Will someone ever contact me? Will they actually write the story and print it? And if they do, will it generate any sales? I don’t know those answers, but I do know this: If they print it, it can’t hurt.

Promoting my Books: Do I have enough ego?

Now that the print version of Documenting America is available, I’m moving into the promotion phase of being an author. It has been available as an e-book since May 2011, and as a print book since mid-November 2011. My short story, “Mom’s Letter”, has been available as an e-book since February. During that time, on Kindle, Smashwords, and the several other sites to which Smashwords distributes, I’ve sold a total 23 copies of the two.

Sometimes I note a sale the day after I’ve spoken to someone about it. When I went to the state ASCE conference in Little Rock in October, I had dinner with an old friend, told him about it, and the next day had an e-sale. In November I mentioned something about it to someone (the circumstances escape me right now), and the next day I had an e-sale. It seems that, at this point at least, I have to sell each individual copy. I have not succeeded in creating a buzz for either work. 

But, I’ve been doing mainly passive promotion. By that I mean: notices on my Facebook page; posts on this blog; posts at the Ozark Writers League Facebook page; a notice to my alumni magazine; posts at Conservative Arkansas Facebook page; posting notices on a couple of writing forums; adding links to my signature for e-mail and forum posting. All things I can do without interacting with a person. It’s out there, waiting for someone to see it. The Facebook posts on other pages took a little chutzpah, but still I would consider that passive marketing. And, I’ll make sure I have a mention of the book and a link to where to find them in our Christmas letter. After all, it’s big news for the year. 

I believe I can safely assume that passive marketing won’t result in many book sales. If I really want to create a buzz for either of these works (though I’m clearly more interested in promoting the book than the short story) I’m going to have to move into active marketing. That will require me to contact real human beings, either in real life or on-line, and either ask them to buy a copy of my book or to help me promote it through an interview or a speaking engagement. I have three or four ideas on how to accomplish this active marketing. One is to research blogs that might want to promote the book. This would be political blogs (more conservative than liberal) and USA history blogs. Another is to contact local civic clubs—Kiwanis, Lions, Civitians, Rotarians, etc—and see if I could speak at them. That requires research, however, to find out who does the speaker scheduling and contact them. 

Today I did some of the research needed for active promotion. I did a search for history blogs and American history blogs. This provided a lot of links, many of which were to abandoned sites or blogs that really wouldn’t apply. In 20 minutes of searching I found one US history blog where the owner encouraged publishers to submit books for review on the blog. I don’t know how he feels about author published books, but I went ahead and e-mailed him, and am now waiting. I suppose next week I’ll begin the process of the civic clubs. 

All this is not comfortable to me. I was raised to not toot my own horn, to let others praise when justified. Now, I have to go out and shout, “Hey! My book is worth reading, worth $10.00 in dead-tree format and $1.25 in pixel format. Buy it, buy it, buy it. How well I do this, and for how long, will likely turn out to be the biggest test of my writing career. 

Stay tuned.

Stewardship of Writing Time

Thanksgiving week was not expected to be a time to get much writing done, and I didn’t for the first part. Our daughter and son-in-law came in with the two grandsons (3 and 1) on Sunday evening, then left the kids with us as they went on to Eureka Springs for a couple of days at a resort, courtesy of their church for pastor appreciation. Watching these two little boys didn’t lend itself to writing.

And actually, for the week before they came I didn’t write much, as the house needed a good release from clutter and dust and accumulation of months of having no visitors.

But the kids left Friday after Thanksgiving, my mother-in-law left on Saturday, so the house turned quiet real fast. With leftovers galore, even food preparation time was greatly reduced. So I did find some things to write, and ways to futher my writing “business”. Here’s my status right now.

  1. Last night I finished reading Doctor Luke’s Assistant, and have marked 60 or so typos and that many other places to make a few improvements. My goal is to e-self-publish this as soon as I can get the edits done, format it for e-books, and have a cover made. I suspect it will be ready in January some time.
  2. The print books of Documenting America arrived! Yesterday I found them at the office. They probably came in on Monday, but I never went to the mail area. I took some to Centerton yesterday when I went there and sold two. Sold one at the office also. I only ordered 20 copies to start with.
  3. I began writing my next short story, “Too Old To Play”. This is the next one in the Danny Tompkins short story series. The first one, “Mom’s Letter,” is available as an e-book. I hope to get this one available as an e-book as well. Again, having a cover made will be the hold-up.
  4. I’m reading a book titled Creating Unforgettable Characters, part of my continuing study of the writing craft. This is a little older, from the 1990s. It makes frequent references to characters in TV shows I never watched, such as Murphy Brown, and movies I never saw such as The Rain Man. But it’s pretty good. I’m gaining some new insights into fictional character development, even if I don’t fully understand the illustrations given.
  5. This morning (I’m home sick, the last stages of recovering from a stomach bug that hit me yesterday morning) I set up my writing business accounting spreadsheet. I entered the print book sales, entered the Suite101 income, and set up the expense tab of the spreadsheet. Maybe I’ll be ready to prepare my Schedule C when tax time comes.
  6. I wrote an article for Buildipedia.com and submitted it on the deadline, Nov 28. This is the first of a Q&A column on construction administration. It’s experimental for the on-line magazine. I have contracts for two columns, and I guess they’ll decide on more and the frequency when they see how these first ones are received. Let’s hope it works. I’ll be paid about 40 cents per word, which isn’t chicken feed.
  7. I completed an article for Decoded Science, another on-line source of potential writing income. I have not yet uploaded the article, as I have to first write short and long writer bios and upload a photo. Maybe I can do that today, and upload the article tomorrow.
  8. Attended a meeting of BNC Writers. We were a small group, but did some good critiquing and planning. We may have one more meeting on Dec 5, then wait till 2012 to resume.

That’s about it. I have much to do with writing over the next two weeks. Our Christmas letter, edits on In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People, the second Buildipedia column, finishing the new short story, planning for marketing Documenting America. Enough to keep me busy.

Holiday Writing Schedule

I have much neglected my blogs of late, both this one and An Arrow Through the Air. I’m now working on holiday schedule, and have for most of the last week as we made a major clean-up of the house prior to the arrival yesterday of our daughter and son-in-law with our two grandsons, and my mother-in-law today. We will watch the kids today through Wednesday as their parents are off to Eureka Springs, Arkansas (an hour, more or less, east of us) for some needed R&R provided by their church. We are hoping three aging adults are more than a match for a 3 1/2 year old and an 8 month old who has discovered crawling and pulling up.

So writing efforts will be curtailed. I’ve learned that I need chunks of time measured in hours to effectively write. Fifteen to thirty minutes at a time just doesn’t cut it. But I can effectively read in those shorter times. So I think my main “writing” tasks will primarily  be reading between now and Christmas. I say primarily because I do have a little writing to do. Here’s my plan.

  • Write the two articles for Buildipedia.com that I’m under contract for. These are the two prototypes of a regular column on construction administration. This will be fairly easy, I think, because it’s within my area of professional expertise. They are only 500-600 words each. The first one, due Nov. 28, is about 2/3 written.
  • Be more regular at posting to my blogs. ‘Nuff said.
  • Read In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. This will be for: consistency of plot, typos, adding physical descriptions of characters as I think needed, and better anchoring the action in time. I also have some more coordination of Ronny Thompson’s pitching record relative to a season.
  • Read Doctor Luke’s Assistant in preparation for e-self-publishing it in early 2012. I’ve gone through about a third of it already.
  • Finish reading the writing help book I’m working through at the moment, on creating memorable characters. I’m less than 1/4 of the way through it right now.

I suppose I could squeeze a few other minor things in there. Of course I’ll be attending BNC Writers tonight, and possibly on Dec 5. If time allows, I’m almost done with an article for Decoded Science, a content site I’ve been approved for. I continue to spend 15-20 minutes every weekday morning at work adding to the passage notes of A Harmony of the Gospel, something I can do in small chunks of time. And I intend to continue to monitor several writing blogs.

So I’ll stay busy, but none of these will be hard and fast things I’ve just gotta do. As time allows, I’ll do them. If it doesn’t allow, no loss.

A Whole New World

As I mentioned in the last couple of posts, last weekend I finished proof-reading the proof copy of Documenting America, and began the process of making the minor changes and uploading it to Kindle, Smashwords, and CreateSpace. For each of these, a review by the distributor organization was required before it would be listed. Those reviews have been completed, and all three distributors have it for sale. Through Smashwords, this includes Barnes & Noble, iTunes, Kobo, and some others.

I also have for sale paper copies I order from CreateSpace. I haven’t ordered any yet. I was planning on deciding this week how many the initial order should be. I have one sold already, to a man who used to work at CEI, with whom I’m Facebook friends. He saw my notice and said he would buy a copy. That tells me maybe I can sell some. That also tells me I’d better find out what I need to do about sales tax.

But the bigger thing to figure out is: Now what?

I’ve been holding off marketing Documenting America, either as an e-book or paper book, because I was waiting on the paper book, and on correcting a couple of typos I knew of. All that’s done, and it’s time to get marketing. An occasional shameless self-promotion on Facebook is probably okay, not more often than once a month. But I need to do more. Here’s some of the things I’m thinking about doing.

  • dropping copies off at local coffee houses, designating them as copies to stay in the coffee house.
  • seeing if I could give a few to the nearby Barnes & Noble. Let them make the sale and keep the entire proceeds. Then, if those sold, maybe they would order a bunch from CreateSpace. Or course, if they agree to take them, I might steer a few buyers their way.
  • see if I could speak at some local civic groups: Kiwanis, Lions, Civitians, Rotary. Those that meet weekly are always looking for speakers. I have in mind a presentation I would make of the material, which could tie in nicely with the book, but not just be about the book.
  • research blogs and see if I can organize a blog tour for the book. Blogs about history or politics are where I’d go to. This is a key way for many authors to promote their books. Having never done it, I suspect just the research of what blogs to target and how to contact the owners and scheduling and follow-up, etc.
  • drop off paper copies at two or three local libraries.
  • then, after a couple of months, maybe see about some radio programs.

I’ve been thinking about the marketing aspects of this for a long time, and have blogged on it before. None of this is new. What is new is the feeling I have. It’s a whole new world now. My book is out, fully out. The time to plan my marketing is over. Time simply to do.

The Freeing Feeling of Rejection

As I mentioned in my last post, the agent has rejected In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. She mentioned that she’d be interested in it if I made some changes. One was too much dialog, not enough narrative. I can fix that, I believe. The other was one of what is or isn’t acceptable within the CBA (Christian Booksellers Association), the trade publishing group for Christian publishers.

But I couldn’t decipher her statement: “addressing the sex, drugs, drinking, and lifestyle at the end of the story is too late for a Christian publisher to accept….” I really don’t know what that means. I asked for clarification, and she responded, but the response didn’t provide any clarification. What does the position of the sex, drugs, drinking, and lifestyle have to do with it? I covered these in the mildest way I know how to do. If even the mild way disqualifies the book for the CBA, so be it. But I wish I knew what the agent meant. I tried to figure it out, and mentioned it in two e-mails, but as I said the clarification didn’t come.

So, after four months of waiting, the book is no longer under consideration by anyone. Rejection is sad, of course, but it is also freeing. I can do anything I want with the book. I can propose it to another agent. I can e-self-publish it. I can publish it as a paper book via CreateSpace. As I mentioned last post, I’m leaning towards e-self-publishing it as quickly as possible, and following through with a paper book soon after.

Right now I’m just waiting on beta readers. I have comments back from three, one of the entire book and two of about 2/3 of the book. I’m making some changes as they come in (typos, not substantive), and will consider substantive changes later. My own re-reading of it is drawing closer.

Rejection is hard to take, but less so with each rejection. To be honest, I expected to be rejected on this, if for no other reason than that rejection is more likely than is acceptance. Why get your hopes up only to have them dashed? Meeting with the agent back at the conference in June, and her wanting to see the partial manuscript, was the inducement I needed to complete the book, so that was good. It had been languishing incomplete for a long time.

So, I won’t say I’m giddy about the rejection, but I’m not unhappy. Whether this was a book that could be acceptable for the Christian market, or whether it’s more for the general market, will be decided by the readers rather than by agents and editors. And the readers can’t be wrong.

So full speed ahead. Let the re-writes begin, and the publishing soon follow.