Fifty Thousand Screaming People

The Plot is Coming Together

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Last night I added 900 words to In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. The brings the total word count to a little over 53,100. Only 22,000 or so to go. At 5,000 a week I’ll be through with it in early October. Of course, I’m not sure I can really do 5,000 a week, every week for a month. We’ll see.

My writing last night brought me to a point where I caught up to a scene I wrote over a year ago; might even have been two years ago. That scene came to me one day. I wanted the protagonist to have a difficult encounter with the reporter who had befriended him, but who was really just out for a story. He wasn’t really a friend.

In that scene, the reporter tells Ronny that his family was involved in a financial scandal related to his college baseball scholarship. The reporter produced the documentary evidence to Ronny, and said the story would run in the next day’s paper. The scene ended with Ronny tearing out of the Cubs’ players’ parking lot, making a cell phone call.

Those 900 words I wrote last night filled in the gap between the story before it and the scene. How did it work out, joining writing from a year ago that depended on all the writing done in the last year? Not too bad. I realized I had to use names differently in speaker tags. I needed to add the part of the reporter having the documentation with him, and Ronny taking it with him. But all in all not bad.

I’ve got one more scene written ahead, where Ronny’s girlfriend learns there is a Mafia plot to hurt or kill him, and where she needs to warn him. I wrote that about a month after I wrote the other disconnected scene, but I won’t have the book to that point for a few more chapters. How will it fit together at that time? Good, I think. At least if this last one is any indication, writing ahead didn’t hurt me.

I have two or three other scenes swirling in my head, about the late chapters in New York City: Ronny on the Brooklyn Bridge, events inside Yankee Stadium, his girlfriend arriving at Yankee Stadium and trying to warn officials. So far I’ve resisted writing them. If I can keep to my production schedule, I’ll be writing them in less than a month. The scenes are impressed upon me, and I won’t forget them. I wrote the other scenes early because I was afraid I would forget them.

So, things are coming together for the young Mr. Thompson and his super right arm. Stay tuned for more updates, either here or on my Facebook author’s page.

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Time: The same old, same old dilemma

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I have only so many hours:minutes a day to devote to writing. Some days are more than others. At the same time, I have only so much mental stamina:physical stamina to apply to those hours:minutes. Sometimes the two don’t align. This weekend they didn’t fully align. After yard work Saturday morning, the first I’ve been able to do since the ehrlichiosis flare-up happened, I felt good. My knees hurt a little, but not too much. I ate, rested, did a few chores inside, then went to The Dungeon to write. Alas, physical tiredness overwhelmed the gray cells, and I got less writing done than I’d hoped. This continued into Sunday.

For the weekend, I think I added somewhere between 3,000 and 4,000 words to “In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People”, bringing the word count to around 52,400. It was good to get past the milestone 50,000, but there’s still a long way to go. At 5,000 words a week, I won’t finish until around October 15. That’s just the first draft. I’ll then have rework and rework and rework to make it truly ready for submittal. Of course, by that time I hope to hear from the agent who has the partial.

Unfortunately, to achieve that much production given the disruption in the hours:minutes/mental:physical continuum, I had to neglect other writing chores. I neglected this blog and An Arrow Through the Air. I had to neglect freelance article writing. I’ve quit proposing articles to Buildipedia.com, even though that pays fairly well. I’ve quit writing for content sites, even though that pays a little. The content sites are not a big deal. I miss the money from Buildipedia. I also miss regularly posting to the blogs.

I’ve also neglected any follow-up work to Documenting America. I started on what might be the first follow-up work, The Candy Store Generation, as well as on a second volume of Documenting America. I’ve also pretty much given up on promoting the volume I’ve e-self-published. Sales have stalled in August after a promising up-tick in July.

Then there’s all the household things that aren’t getting done because they won’t get done if I don’t do them. Such as the over that only half works. Such as the microwave that no longer gives us full power. Such as the place way up at the top of the chimney, 30 feet off the ground, where the siding has torn away. Such as the skylight that’s leaking. Such as the painting that will be needed once the skylight is fixed. Such as my various piles of papers that aren’t as neat or hidden as they need to be. Such as the pile of bills and receives that need to be filed. Such as twenty other things I’m forgetting.

Time. There ain’t enough of it. To whom much is given, much is required. Unfortunately, I may be pretty much out of much.

Harmony of the gospels

Writing Progress: Harmony of the Gospels

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So I come to work much earlier than I need to, mainly to miss the traffic. I leave the house about 06:20 and pull into the parking lot about 06:45. I make coffee, put my lunch in the fridge, have a brief devotional and prayer time, get my first cup of coffee, then begin work. Not office work, but writing work. Before 08:00 I’m on my own time, not office time. Of course, if anyone needs me for expert engineering advice, or should a desperate client or irate property owner calls, I’m here to take the call and tend to office business. But most of the time for that hour is my own.

My current project during the first 20 minutes of that hour is completion of my Harmony of the Gospels. I began this back in 2001, when I was in the early stages of writing Doctor Luke’s Assistant, and gave lots of thought to how Luke gathered his information, how his was different from the other gospels, etc. So I began taking some notes. This eventually grew into three spiral notebooks, stenno size. Beginning with the Triumphal Entry, I wrote out the parallel texts, discussed how to harmonize them, and wrote the harmony. All long hand. Okay, some of it is in my own special shorthand. On occasion, the discussion was long, mainly when the gospels appeared to have different timelines and I worked out the apparent discrepancies.

I finished the Harmony somewhere around 2005. My goal was to make one seamless text out of the four. There are a lot of parallel column harmonies around, both ancient and modern. I didn’t figure we needed one of those. I wanted to do the unified text kind. Why? Partly as my own Bible study tools, but also because I thought such a text would be useful. I had no real intention to seek publication of this. It was a labor of love, not profit. Some might think it a waste of time, and perhaps it was, or still is.

I told my former pastor about it (he’s since moved to another church), and he wanted to see it. The problem was, it was all still in handwritten manuscript. So I typed it. 104 letter-sized pages in 12 point font. I decided I should go ahead and type my notes as well. I divided them into two types: passage notes, which dealt with blending specific portions of the text; and appendices, which dealt with larger issues and timelines. I identified nine appendices needed, and quickly produced three of them. Then I jumped to the passage notes.

I quickly discovered that what I had written in the notebooks would not do for typed material. Sometimes I made flip comments, things only I would want to see, or at least I wouldn’t want someone else to see. Some were not correct. Most were in my grammatical shorthand. So I took the notebooks and began typing passage notes from them, but mostly I re-wrote them as I went along, putting them in correct grammar, expanding on concepts I must have had in my head but didn’t write in the notebooks, sometimes changing my mind. All this time I also kept re-reading the Harmony itself, looking for typos or things that seemed could be improved.

I came to a point where I had about forty or fifty pages of appendices and passage notes, printed a proof copy for me and one to give to my pastor. He later made approving comments of it.

Lately (last three weeks) I have spent those fifteen or twenty minutes each weekday morning working on an added appendix, about the trial(s) of Jesus by Jewish officials, including Peter’s denials of Jesus. The time between the arrest in Gethsemane and handing Jesus over to Pilate. It is a fascinating study to see how these harmonize, and to try to work out one or two apparent discrepancies. I completed that appendix, which ran to eight pages, yesterday, proofed it at home last night, and made the corrections this morning. I also got a start on the passage notes for this section this morning. I estimate those will take me a week or a little more to do.

So if this is not a commercial project, and carving out writing time every day and week is so difficult and never winds up with enough writing time, why do I do this? Because I sense I should. Because it gives me more satisfaction, in a way, than the commercial projects I work on. Because I’m learning a lot as I do it. Because it presents me with many springboards for Bible study and research. Because it is very fulfilling.

At twenty minutes a day, I’m sure completion of the passage notes and a few more appendices will required another year, maybe more. I’ll let you know. Meanwhile, since this is a harmony of the NIV, which is a copyrighted work, I can’t really share it with people. The pastor’s copy was for his personal study, not review and comment, and I dare not give away any more.

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Publishing Saga Continues

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The PDF conversion saga may have drawn to a close today. I say may because I haven’t yet taken the step of actually uploading the file to CreateSpace. I’ll do that tonight, I hope. Today, a little after my expanded lunch hour, I had what looks like a good file: a PDF with the pages showing as 5.5 x 8.5 just as I want it.

But the gyrations I had to go through to get there! Last night I posted to the CreateSpace forums, saying exactly what my problem was, all the software I was using and what versions. Overnight one of the experts posted to say it ought to work. He suggested making a dummy file and seeing if I could create a 5.5 x 8.5 PDF out of that. If so, I would know something in my book file was corrupt. If not, I’d know the problem was in the software.

That seemed like a good idea. I created a two page dummy file and used Adobe Acrobat to create the PDF, and it created it with the larger pages. I pulled up a four page file I had on my computer and tried that: same thing with the larger pages. I was getting frustrated.

But then I saw that I had the option of creating the file in “PDF995” printer. This is an inexpensive program that does what the expensive Acrobat does, though supposedly not as well. I tried that with my dummy, and got 5.5 x 8.5 pages. I tried it with the four page file, and got 5.5 x 8.5 pages. I tried it with my book file, and got 5.5 x 8.5 pages. Yea! But wait, it turned out only the first two pages were the right size. All the ones following it were the incorrect size. In the Word document, the first two pages were defined as one section, the rest of the book as a separate section. Also, when I tried to use Acrobat following some instructions my helper gave me, it still created in the larger pages.

Back to the CreateSpace forums. The same one who helped me before did so again. He said it appeared my Word document was corrupt. It was a place to start. Also odd was that the cheaper PDF995 product seemed to be working better than the expensive Acrobat product. He had a few suggestions.

I went to the Word document and copied the Section Break to the end of the book. This created a third section, of just one page at the end. Then I created the PDF using PDF995. It gave me a book of all 5.5 x 8.5 pages, except for the last page that remained 8.5 x 11. This was becoming quite frustrating. I played with some settings, then decided what I needed to do was remove all section breaks. This would mean I’d lose the headers and footers, but so be it. So I removed the section breaks and created the PDF using PDF995. By this time I had decided to quit messing with the Adobe product. And it created the PDF with the right size pages throughout!

I put my headers and footers back in, which created two sections. I tried creating it with PDF995, and it created correctly. So, I had a PDF file I could upload to CreateSpace. Of course, I noticed a few things I had to change in the formatting. I forgot to add the ISBN numbers, had to add a half title page and blank page before the real title page. I had to take care of a couple of orphan lines, things like that. I recreated the PDF, and it still worked. It’s at 188 pages now instead of 196, which is okay.

So, tonight when I go home I get to work on the cover and the back cover copy. I don’t know how difficult either of those will be. My main concern now is that I have the interior margins too large, and the font too small, and that it’s going to look amateurish. I guess at this time I’ll let it run as is, and see at the proof stage if I have to make any corrections. Right now, if I had to make a prediction, I’d say the book will be uploaded by Sunday. Or Monday if I need to make another PDF.

So the saga is continuing. Stay tuned.

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It’s Maddening Being Your Own Publisher

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And that’s what a self-published writer is: his own publisher.

 I got the Kindle requirements down without too much trouble, and my two books are up and available. Sales are slow, but I’m not doing a whole lot to promote it, pending having my print book available. I figured out Smashwords, and both my books are available there, and in their premium catalogue. That means they are distributed to the Apple iTunes store, the Sony Reader store, and elsewhere. That hasn’t helped me much so far as I have no sales there. Of course, I haven’t done any promotion to speak of, because I’m waiting till I have my print book available till I promote.

So why isn’t the print book available, and when will it be available? I finally began the process this week. On Tuesday I opened my CreateSpace account. This is an Amazon company for self-publishing print on demand books. Also on Tuesday I read instructions and watched the training video.

On Wednesday I began the process of getting my book, Documenting America,  printed. I created the book in the CreateSpace system, got an ISBN for it (the freebie kind), and pulled up my MS Word file and did the reformatting needed to go from e-book to print book, including changing the page size to 5.5 x 8.5 inches, one of the CS standard sizes. Finally I was ready to upload my book to CS. I learned it had to be converted to PDF first, and here I was stuck. I only have the Adobe Reader, not Adobe Acrobat, the program that lets you create PDF files. Getting that I soon learned would set me back $139 or $179.

I was aware of several low cost or no cost alternates, but rather than go to the trouble of finding and downloading them (it was getting kind of late), I decided to e-mail the reformatted book to my office and see if I would be allowed to use our office software to create personal PDF files. This morning I learned I could use it, and so created the file on my noon hour. Problem was, it didn’t create 5.5 x 8.5 inch pages. It created 8.5 x 11 inch pages, with the print limited to the middle 5.5 x 8.5 inches less the internal margins I set.

So I did what I normally do when faced with a problem like this. I read some of the help and experimented with the menu system. I soon saw where I could convert the PDF writer to write to 5.5 x 8.5 inch pages, and created a new PDF file to overwrite the other one. Except, the new file still had 8.5 x 11 pages. Did it twice more to make sure I hadn’t made a mistake, with the same results.

So I did what I normally do when faced with a problem like this. I went to look for CreateSpace forums, where members help themselves work through problems. Found the forums, joined them, and began reading. I found the question I had asked several times in a couple of threads, but never answered. Some of those threads run twenty pages or more. At the moment I haven’t the heart to read the twenty pages. Maybe I’ll start a new thread.

So I did what I normally do when faced with a problem like this. I went and got my lunch and ate it, along with some chips I’m not supposed to have. Through all this time, I set aside writing in favor of publishing. I’d rather be writing. But writing won’t necessarily lead to books in print, sales, and readers. So do the publishing thing I will.

Somehow I’ll get some help with this PDF conversion, and get it right. I suspect that in 2 weeks to a month I’ll be holding books in my hand and have them available to sell. And I’ll rejoice.

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The Other Part of To Do Lists

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In my last post I mentioned how having a plan for my novel helped me when I came to a point where I wasn’t sure what to do next. I made a plan and then began following that plan.

That doesn’t mean the plan was perfect. Already I’ve made two adjustments as I went. I consolidated two chapters and shifted the order of two others. But the plan has kept me going, and I continue to make almost daily progress on the book.

But, what I don’t have, or I should say what I haven’t done a very good job on, is developing a to-do list system for my writing. At work I print out a daily log sheet, where I record major activities, people I interact with, log my calls, and sometimes log my e-mails. Instructions from clients, instructions to contractors–all goes on the sheet.

One part of the sheet has a list of my current projects, which I change as I need to, and a space for me to write my to-do list. I’ve never done the best job with the to-do list, but I generally use it. On the left side I write things for the office, and on the right side I write personal items (pay this bill, call the plumber, etc.). As I say, I’ve never done the best job at keeping and following a to-do list.

However, about two years ago, maybe not that long, I heard about a system where you put only four things on your to-do list. I suppose the idea is you can concentrate better on those things. If you get them all done, add four more. I’ve been following that, and I think it’s helped. Although, sometimes I see that list with only four items on it and think that’s all I have to do, and tend to slack off a bit. So I’ve taken to drawing a line after the four and adding two or three more things, just to remind myself that there’s more that I must do.

Well, for writing I have never been able to develop that kind of system. I tried listing all my works-in-progress, and drawing a to-do list from them. That hasn’t worked real well, partly because my works-in-progress keep changing. I’m working on a new system now, and I hope within a week or two to be able to report back that I’ve found something that works.

Without a to-do list, I forget things. I forgot to check back with my Smashwords dashboard after I uploaded Documenting America to see whether it was accepted to the premium catalogue. It wasn’t, and it sat there for a couple of days without my checking it. Then, after I learned that, I took a couple more days to get to it. Finally I made the corrections, only they weren’t the right corrections, and it still wasn’t accepted. Even this time I failed to check the dashboard daily, and consequently was a few days late getting it corrected and accepted.

Same thing with doing the work needed to get the paper edition of Documenting America out. I need to do some study at CreateSpace, and see how to turn my manuscript into print. I actually think it’s fairly easy, but I never seem to get to it. Perhaps having a to-do list will help.

Anyway, I’m working on it. As I say, hopefully in a couple of weeks I’ll have something that works.

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Writing Productivity

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on The Writers View 2 (TWV2) e-mail group this week, the question asked by a panel member was about productivity for the writer. How do you establish productivity as a routine? What derails your productivity? How do you get it back.

I was interested, given that I’ve just come through a time of pretty good productivity, but anticipate less over the next couple of weeks. Almost all my writing time was spent on my baseball novel, In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. With the 850 words I added last night, it now stands at about 37,000 words, on the way to somewhere around 85,000.

When the good productivity began about three weeks ago (or a little less), I worked on it over a weekend, and got 2,000 words written both on Saturday and again on Sunday. It took me a while to get back to it during the week. I was trying to correct something on the Smashwords edition of Documenting America, and it wasn’t working.  Plus just getting it ready for Smashwords took some doing, a couple of weeks before that. That was “writing time”, even though no words got added to paper.

That Wednesday I added at least 2,000 words to FTSP, maybe more. I came up to the end of the part of the book that was clearly planned out. Now the planning was all in my mind. I’m in the part of the book where “strange incidents” begin happening to the protagonist, Ronny Thompson, as the NY Mafia guy tries to distract him from pitching well, thus hoping the Cubs don’t make the playoffs, which means they obviously wouldn’t win the World Series.

I had thought through some of these strange incidents, but had never planned them. Which one of the five would be first? Which second, etc.? How would I lead up to each? How would I make it clear to the reader that something wasn’t quite right about the way things were happening? Then what about the counter-moves by the Chicago Mafia guy? Would he respond to each strange incident, or were his counter-moves actually in the works before the incidents?

Then what about the sports reporter for the Chicago Tribune? How was I going to work him in in response to the strange incidents? I hadn’t really thought about that at all. He was simply going to receive a packet of material at his desk from an anonymous source, material damaging to the Thompson family, and run it in the paper. That didn’t seem quite right, however.

So on Thursday of last week, rather than try to work on the novel by adding words, I worked on it by developing a plan for the last 58,000 words. I listed the strange incidents yet to come and put them in the logical order. I interspersed them with interactions of Ronny and his girlfriend, Ronny on the diamond, the reporter doing some investigative work, the two Mafia guys and their rogue associates, the girlfriend by herself.

Three important things included in this planning were related to Ronny’s girlfriend. was the scene where the readers come to realize (if they haven’t figured it out from the foreshadowing) that Ronny’s girlfriend is a Mafia plant, and not a very nice girl. I planned a chapter of Ronny and Sarah having a quiet, innocent dinner at his apartment, and a chapter of her coming to realize what her life had become, and how it was once better, setting the stage for her character arc by the end of the book. All that I knew I wanted in the book, but hadn’t actually figured out how it was going to happen. Now I know, and the first two of those three events are written.

To each of the chapters I added a number of words I wanted it to be, approximately, with the whole thing adding up to my planned 85,000. I’m not being dogmatic about these chapter lengths, however. I’m just guessing, based on the items in the chapter, how long they’ll be.

So beginning last Friday, through Monday, I had great productivity. Looking at my written plan, which could be called a loose outline, I began writing, not skipping anything. Just knowing what was coming next helped me to prepare. I’m sure in my non-writing hours I thought through the chapter I would write that night. In four days I added more than 10,000 words, then on two weekend days, with distractions and some health issues, I added another 1,400.

I was going to write about the second part of planning to increase productivity, but I’ve run out of noon hour time, and this post is too long already. I’ll add another post soon.

May the productivity continue.

Fifty Thousand Screaming People

Writing Productivity

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Once again, I’m batching it, at least through tonight. Lynda is in Oklahoma City, helping tend to grandchildren and visiting a friend in the hospital there, someone she went to church and school with in Meade Kansas. So it’s been quiet around the house. I often don’t turn the TV on much, preferring to read or write in the silence. Some writers say they do better with noise around, either background music or street noises. I think I do better in the silence.

For all the peace and quiet, I didn’t have as productive a week as I could have had. For the week I added over 8,000 words to In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People, bringing the total words to a couple of hundred short of 35,000, on its way to around 85,000. That sounds like a lot of production, and I suppose it is. If I could do that many words every week I’d be done with it in six or seven weeks. Done with the first draft, that is.

However, I could have written much more. I allowed the spam problem on this blog take at least a day away from production and I tried to figure out what to do. A lot of that time wasn’t figuring time, however, but fuming time. Fuming and wasting time, feeling sorry for myself. Another day I was too tired to write. I sat at the computer for a couple of hours, but got nothing written. A professional writer should be able to fight through the tiredness, and a produce through perspiration when inspiration fails.

Part of my slowness was that a couple of these chapters were something I was writing up to, but hadn’t figured out exactly how I’d do them. One was the first Mafia-induced distraction in the protagonist’s life. I came to that chapter with no plan. I was able to write it, and I think produce a good chapter, with a twist or two that didn’t come to me until during the writing.

Then there was the chapter where the protagonist’s “girlfriend” shows the readers that she isn’t what she claims to be. I had sort of been dreading that chapter, knowing it had to be in the book but not sure how to write it in a way that my mother would approve. Well, not my mother. She didn’t put many restrictions on her reading. Let’s say in a way my mother-in-law would approve. She doesn’t want to read things the least risqué or lurid. As I was writing the chapter, I found a way to show what I wanted to show without being at all explicit. I wrote that chapter over the weekend, and I’m pleased with it as it stands. I’m sure I can improve it some in rewrites.

Yesterday I wrote two chapters, over 3,500 words. The second one is a critical chapter where the girlfriend has her first plot point, the event that causes her to embark on the journey that will bring her through her character arc. Those that teach writing talk about the two plot points the protagonist should go through that leads him into the stages of his journey, but I’ve not heard them talk about plot points for characters below the protagonist-antagonist level, but it seems to me such events apply to them as well.

Anyhow, said girlfriend has begun her character arc. Tonight, plans are for the protagonist to have his fourth “strange thing” happen to him that is really a Mafia-induced event. It’s a big one, done under the noses of three people who are supposed to protect the protag from such things. I plan for that to be only about 1,000 words, though we’ll see how it goes. I’ve thought of one change I need to make in an earlier chapter. I’d love to have enough time to get into another chapter, where the “good” Mafia Don is able to add some protection for the protag in a way that nobody would suspect him.

One thing I did, on Friday I think, after I was too tired to write a second chapter, was to develop an outline for the rest of the book. I had an outline in my mind, even down to thinking through a scene here, a scene there, but I had nothing in writing, nothing that told me, “Okay, you’ve finished this chapter; what comes next?” Now I have that, and it’s a good feeling. It shows me that my thoughts on the length of the book are about right, and that the plot is about right. All that’s missing are the words.

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Is it always going to be this way?

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I don’t take adversity very well. I need my life to be full of peace in order to be productive and creative. Today was anything but that.

It actually began last night, getting home from church around 8 PM, I found a large hole dug in my yard. The underground phone lines had been marked on the ground about a week ago, and the digging was where the markings were. Since we haven’t had any phone problems, I assumed this was an un-requested upgrade of the service line. Entering the house, I found we had no phone service.

It took me four phone calls today to find out who was responsible. That man couldn’t tell me when it would be fixed, just that they’d have a technician out not later than 5 PM tomorrow. Meanwhile I get home and the hole is still open and fenced off and I still have no phone service. If AT&T wants people to keep their land lines, they are sure doing a poor job of showing it.

Then there was the spam attack and trying to figure out what to do about it. That took almost 3 hours. I’d load a WordPress help page, and find it a mass of words, crammed together, with graphics and links. Page after page, link after link. You would think, since this is such a problem, they would have somewhere on the dashboard a direct link saying something like, “Download and install this widget to protect against automatic spam swarms. But no, you must search for it. Figure out exactly what you want and then search for it. Go through the multiple crammed screens, file downloads, file extractions. Never a Wizard to show what to do next.

Finally I figured it out. The protection is installed and active. Two hundred fifty auto spam posts deleted. All desire to write gone. I started the blog to develop a web presence to build a writer’s platform—that ready-made audience that agents and editors want you to have before they will even talk with you about any book. Yeah, right. My audience is smaller than my techno-IQ, which is almost in negative numbers.

I can’t help but think of that song that we played on tape and sang for Ephraim multiple times last week: “There was an old lady who swallowed a fly….” In this case it would be: There once was a writer who started a blog. Stupid dog to start up a blog. He started a blog to capture some readers…. I need to work on it beyond there.

Goodnight all. I can’t work under these conditions. Might as well go eat.

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