Category Archives: Writing

Status of Writing Projects

As of last Thursday or Friday, I finished the bulk of the text on my non-fiction book, The Candy Store Generation. I still have three chapters to tweak a little, where I’ve thought of something to add but haven’t done it yet. I started on one of those places yesterday. These will be enhancements or completion of thoughts I left hanging. After that, it’s print and re-read. My main fear is I have repeated myself extensively, and a 40,500 word book only needs to be 35,000. It will take several nights reading almost continuously to know that.

At that point I hope to improve some of the graphics. Several are copied from Congressional Budget Office reports available on-line. Most of them turned out well, but a couple are blurry because they are of poor quality in the original. I contacted CBO last week about getting some clearer copies. Six days later and no word yet. If I don’t get better graphs, I can go with those I have. And, I can always contact my congressman. His local office is only three or four miles from my office.

Yesterday I sent the manuscript for TCSG to a book designer, to let him assess whether the graphics will give problems for an e-book, as well as to give me a cost for the internal design/formatting. I formatted the four items myself that I currently have listed, but don’t think I want to tackle this one. I have the e-book cover in-hand, but not the print book cover yet.

In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People is done, and is with an editor right now. Today is day fourteen of the wait. Although this micro-press is considering it, I’m assuming I’ll end up self-publishing it (my inner pessimist being what he is). If so, I’ll do one more read-through, then all I’ll need is the covers for e-book and print book. I’ll wait until about July 1 for the editor, then forge ahead.

My regular column for Buildipedia.com is being cut from twice a month to once a month beginning in July. Bummer. I’ve been enjoying the money from it. I’m actually thinking of pulling some of those thoughts together and writing a construction administration book, maybe in 2013 or 2014. The columns I did are considered work-for-hire, so I can’t use them verbatim.

And, I prepared and uploaded my first article for Decoded Science, a re-work of an article I did for Suite101.com. But the DecSci policy has changed since I was approved to write there, and they no longer accept previously published articles. So, back to the drawing board—or the writing board I should say. I have an idea for a short series of articles there. I wasn’t planning on doing the research and writing quite so soon as this, but will think about it.

With my two main projects coming to an end, I’ll soon be moving on to the next one. More on that in the next post.

Works-in-Progress

As I’ve reported before, I almost always have several writing projects on-going at any given time. No doubt too many. I thought I’d use a post to tell what I’m working on, anywhere from “finished and waiting” to “actively brainstorming” to “tweaking.” Here’s what I’ve got working.

In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People is complete, and I submitted the full manuscript to the editor of a small press who requested it (a very small press). Today is day 10 for it to be in his hands. I’ll let it go at least 30 days before doing anything. Well, I want to re-read a couple of sections of it and perhaps do a few edits. I’m not optimistic it will be picked up by this press, or if it is that they will present me an acceptable contract.

The Candy Store Generation: How the Baby Boomers Are Screwing-Up America is so close to being finished I can taste it. Each chapter is complete, though for several chapters I’ve thought of an item or two I’d like to add. Had one of those come to mind yesterday evening, didn’t write it down, and this morning it was gone. Hopefully I can get that back. I made an inquiry to the Congressional Budget Office about getting better quality graphs directly from them instead of pulling them from CBO publication PDFs; so far no response. I suppose I’ll have to contact my congressman’s office to get them.

Documenting America: Homeschool Edition is a new project, begun less than two weeks ago. I already have DA done and for sale. A member of my writers group said she wanted to use it for homeschooling her high school freshman. I’d thought about that as another market for it. It’s not a history text, but could be a history elective for a student more interested in history than the average student. I completed the student sections of the first seven chapters, then put out a call for beta readers at a Facebook Christian autor’s group I belong to. So far no takers. My problem is my history classes were so long ago I’m not sure the questions/comments I’m writing are the right ones for high school students.

Doctor Luke’s Assistant, my church history novel, needs some tweaking. The table of contents for the e-book didn’t format right, and I finally figured out how to fix it. That’s a tonight project. Since I enrolled this book in the Kindle Select Program, I get to list it for free for five days out of the 90 days in the enrollment. Those 90 days end the 28th of June, so I need to use my five days, but I don’t want to till I get the TOC properly formatted and linked. Hopefully I can have if for free next Wednesday through Sunday.

– Buildipedia.com published my latest article today. I have one more under contract, due June 15 for publishing on June 22. The editor said they will cut back to one per month in July, as the ad revenue isn’t what they want for that “channel,” plus they aren’t getting participation from contractors as much as they’d hoped. However, she said she was hearing good things about the articles.

– I’m approved to write for Decoded Science, and had an article ready but lost it. I began recreating it yesterday, which isn’t really a big process since it’s an adaptation of one of my Suite 101 articles. I hope to finish and upload it sometime this weekend.

– I have begun brainstorming a short story, based on a night-time police action in my hometown of Cranston, Rhode Island a few months ago. At first it was sort of a joke with a former classmate who observed the action, but I saw how I could make it work as a stand-alone story, as well as in a series of short stories. I wrote two paragraphs a couple of months ago, but since then have been just brainstorming. I don’t know that I want to take on a series of short stories that could turn into another major project. But then, if I spread it out over a few years….

– I have also begun brainstorming the sequel to In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. This was suggested to me by classmate and good friend Gary. He said I had a lot of loose ends that would make good plot lines for a sequel. I’ve worked those plot lines through in my head, and even typed and printed them. I have a penultimate scene mostly outlined. I’ve worked through a couple of different ways of how to start it, and think I’ve decided on a start. The middle hasn’t come to me yet, but it will once I start writing. I haven’t quite committed to this being a real writing project, but I’m 95% there.

That’s enough, don’t you think?

Finish What I Start

I visited Terry Whalin’s blog today, and saw this post: Stop the Cycle of Unfinished Projects. And I immediately thought that’s what I need.

I have a lot of unfinished projects in the air, mainly for writing, but also for things around the house, mainly financial type things.

I guess for the next couple of weeks I will concentrate on finishing something.

I don’t have any additional commentary; just posting for information.

How Well Do Publishers Edit?

Talk to people who are involved with traditional publishing about the role of editors, and you hear mixed messages. Some say publishers no long provide significant editing services. The author submits a “camera ready” manuscript, and it gets published. Any errors are the fault of the author, not the publisher.

Still others insist that the editing provided by the publisher doesn’t change. They content edit. They line edit. They proofread. The put out good books, just as they always have.

Probably a lot of both is going on. The alleged lack of editing by publishers is something I’ve been concerned with, and is one of the factors that pushed me toward self-publishing. I figured if I had to do all the editing, why seek a publisher?

I recently read a review on Amazon of a traditionally published book that included the following comment.

“…the editing/proofreading was terrible. Inexplicable changes in font size. Missing words. Wrong words. Mispelled words. Clearly a hurry-up, shoddy job of publishing.”

This book briefly hit number one on the New York Times bestseller list, and is by a multipublished bestselling author. It is the only review out of 163 (or at least out of the 50 of those that I read) that mentions this. I haven’t read the book, but will be soon.

So it seems that, to some extent, those who say publishers no longer edit are correct.

 

My Upcoming Writing Schedule

Saturday afternoon I finished reading through In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People, marking locations to improve the text. Most of the edits were for typos, improving odd sentence structure, and fixing name problems. By that I mean where I used people’s names too much in dialogue. Also, I found one embarrassing error in a name, where I changed it very early on in the writing but somehow missed one place. The MS Word search and replace feature tells me that was the only straggler.

I finished typing the edits yesterday afternoon. I’ll print it today and set it aside for a couple of weeks. Actually, I’m not sure how long that will be. The editor I e-mailed three chapters and a synopsis to said he was sending the chapters to “readers,” and they would “get back to me in a few weeks.” While I’m reconciled that I will probably self-publish this, I’m willing to delay a little to let that run its course.

Meanwhile, I have to be writing. So yesterday I switched back to my non-fiction work-in-progress, The Candy Store Generation”. I added 400 words to it last night, coming close to finishing Chapter 5, Boomer Corporations. I still have research to do on that, to plug a hole reserved for it about 1/4 of the way into the chapter. But the words are almost done.

I haven’t been thinking of TCSG for over a month, and I’ve actually forgotten where I was in it. I know I’m shooting for 40,000 words, and that I’m at 32,800 now, implying another 7,200 to go. But that word count is a target only. I’m thinking the book may fall short of that and be at a logical concluding point.

I’d really like to get this done and published in time to perhaps ride the coattails of the current election cycle. Not that I think it will be a huge seller or have an impact on the election, but while people’s attention is on politics, it probably has a better chance at success.

Depending on how the research goes, I should be able to have it done in a month or less. I can then take up to a month to edit it, and try to have it published by mid-July. That’s later than I hoped, but it’s doable. I would then try to have FTSP out a couple of weeks later, still well within baseball season.

My plans are then to work on two short stories. One will be in my Danny Tompkins series, on teenage grief. It will probably be the last one. The other will be the first of what could become a series, but which might be a singleton. It will be an espionage story set in Cranston, RI (my hometown), with the heroine having the name of a classmate of mine, with her permission. I’ve written the first two paragraphs of this, and have been plotting it in my mind.

I don’t know where this will lead. If I like the way it turns out, I could turn it into a series, having this female CIA operative go to various places I have been overseas. That would be a way to use these experiences in my writing, something I’ve been wondering how to do.

After that, assuming I’m not brain-dead, I have a choice between three or four projects. I had been thinking about working on another novel, an espionage one, tentatively titled China Tour. I also see a possibility of working on more volumes in the Documenting America brand. I started a little research on what could be a Civil War edition of that. Given that we are at the sesquicentennial of that conflict, the timing is good.

However, I may just go ahead and write a sequel to FTSP. My friend Gary, who was a beta reader, said, “The ending says a lot but leaves much unsaid as well.  That’s a perfect setup for a sequel.” As I wrote in the past, I hadn’t really thought about that, and didn’t consciously write the end to launch a sequel. But I’ve looked at it, and he’s right. When I wrote out, in manuscript, all the loose ends, I came up with more than enough to make a similar length novel. The penultimate scene near the end has come to mine—indeed, I’ve had trouble getting it out of my mind. Even a potential title has reared up.

So that’s where I may be going. No shortage of work. And to think, back in 2000, I just wanted to tell a single story. Now it’s a snowball running downhill.

Small Payouts Ahead

My income from writing remains small, but is coming in slowly but surely. Most of it is produced by my Buildipedia articles. I have a twice per month column on construction administration. Here’s a link to my profile, which includes links to articles. I earn $100 for each of these articles. Payment comes about three weeks after the article appears, by check. I have a contract for one more of these, but the contracts have been coming in like clockwork, and my articles going out. My accounts receivable right now is, I think, $200 for two of them.

My Amazon income is slow. For my four titles on Amazon Kindle, along with the print version of Documenting America, I’ve made just over $56. More than half of that has come from personally selling print books. Amazon pays out once you accumulate $10 in royalties, during the second month after you get there. I had done so in December, and in February I had my first Amazon payout, $10.97 by direct transfer to my bank account. If my current calculations are correct, I’ve since accrued $10.44 in Kindle royalties. That means I can expect another transfer in June. A small account receivable.

Over at Suite101.com, despite the hard times they have experienced due to changes in Google’s search algorithms, and despite the fact I haven’t added any articles there since February 2011, I continue to ear some money. Revenues were really low the second half of 2011 and January 2012. They began to pick up some in February, and have remained up. The payout threshold at Suite is only $5.00. Through April 28 I had earned $5.17 in royalties in April (having made payout in February and March. Payment from Suite comes via PayPal, always before the 15th of the month after you hit payout and usually the first Tuesday of the month. Since the first Tuesday of May is the 1st, I don’t expect payment till the 8th.

All of which I’m sure has some readers laughing, that I would bother to track and worry about these minor income streams. I need to for tax purposes, of course. Someday I hope they will be bigger, much bigger in the case of Amazon. Learning to track them now and properly account for them should help in the future, when [dream alert!] I’ll be raking in the dough from several sources.

Tedious Editing Almost Complete

Since about April 18 I have been editing In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. My time goals for this were: 1) to have the manuscript complete so that I can pitch it to an editor at a writers conference in Oklahoma City on Friday, May 4; and 2) to be ready to self-publish it almost immediately thereafter assuming no one would be interested in the book.

The editing has been tedious. I was trying to improve the timeline. After covering a partial season that the hero spends with the Chicago Cubs, the book traces the events in a complete season. The last time I looked at the book, I felt that I had end-loaded the season—that is, too many event were crowded too late in the season. I also had him not connecting with a girlfriend until some time in late June. I decided that was too late, and many other events were too late, and so I’d better move them earlier in the season.

At the same time, I wanted to be sure that the pitching record of Robo Ronny Thompson made sense relative to where the book was in the season. So if I said, “On June 1, Ronny’s record was 13-1,” I wanted to make sure that was a doable record for a great pitcher.

To accomplish these edits, I first created a Cubs’ season schedule. I took their schedule for this year, 2012, and made a slight adjustment in starting date and in days of the week. I wanted the season to end at a certain date, but the 2012 schedule didn’t end then. So I changed the starting date, and deleted one or two off days to make the schedule work. Then, I created first a spreadsheet table that I later dumped into Word, listing dates and games, including home and away status, and identified when Ronny would pitch.

To this schedule I added all the events in the book, first where I had them, then moving them to the earlier dates to spread things out. I compared the Cubs’ games on the critical days, and discovered sometimes they were playing out of town when they needed to be in Chicago, or vice versa. This required me to either adjust the date or adjust the schedule to make them align. After all these changes, I added the dates from the schedule to the beginning of each scene in the manuscript. This is a temporary thing, and will come out before I either publish or submit the manuscript.

As I said, I found this tedious. Sometimes, when the schedule and events didn’t mesh, I felt that my head was ready to explode, so I shelled out and played mindless computer games when I knew I should be sticking to business. Eventually I came back to the work and figured the schedule out. Now I believe, subject to one more careful reading, that the schedule and the events dovetail perfectly. I cut back on the number of wins Ronny gets during the season, based on my friend Gary’s review (thought not as far back as he suggested). I added quite a bit to the motivation of other characters, hoping they are a little more fleshed-out.

Now I’m down to one slow and careful reading. I plan to do that beginning tonight. I suspect I’ll find a few typos that have escaped my previous readings. I’ll probably find some awkward phrasing that I’ll improve. Possibly I’ll find that the timeline doesn’t work quite as good as I’d like. Possibly I’ll need to change the days of games during the playoffs—oops, spoiler alert. If all goes well, by this time next week I’ll have the final edits on paper and begin typing them. I’ll know whether or not to bother any more with trying to shop it to an editor or agent. And I’ll be a week away from self-publishing it, cover permitting.

Advantages of Mixed-up Genres

As I reported in my last post, I had trouble writing this week. Receiving the subpoena to give a deposition in a lawsuit (our company is involved only as witnesses at this point, and all the attorneys believe it will stay that way) resulted in my spending a lot of energy in preparation. Reading through the correspondence on the project made me sad, as I saw things go downhill through the material in my files.

Then there was the problem of the Ford dealership not getting my pick-up repaired. I brought it in for a tune-up last Tuesday, April 10. I didn’t get it back till yesterday, April 19. I covered that long story in a metaphors of life post at my other blog, An Arrow Through the Air.

So I arrived home each night mentally spent and, to a lesser extent, physically exhausted. After simple meals (Lynda is away), went to The Dungeon, in the quiet house, determined to write a thousand or more words. I managed to do that pre-subpoena, but not after.

The Candy Store Generation stared at me from the computer, a mere 4,000 to 10,000 words away from being finished. But I was lucky if I could add 100 words. The mental energy needed to add any significant amount to it just wasn’t there. I was at the point where I need a little more research to flesh out two chapters, and a part of another. With that research in hand I think I can knock out the chapters, but there’s writing to be done on them even without the research; I couldn’t do it.

It wasn’t writer’s block, it was just mental distraction. And tiredness. I spent some time playing mindless computer games, trying to concentrate on reading writing/publishing blogs, but making little progress. Then I remembered: I have another book to work on: In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. I had a review from a beta reader, who made some good suggestions, especially about when I called the protagonist by what name: first only, first diminutive, first nickname, first and last, last only.

That solved my dilemma. Wednesday night I began working through that, and got a little more than half through the book. Thursday night I picked it up again, and finished it, making a few other small edits along the way. I now think I’m consistent with using his name, and have all characters call him by what they would in a real life situations. I had some professional situations where he was called by his first name, when the speaker really would have said his last name.

The book now stands ready for a final read-through—or almost so. I still need to coordinate the hero’s won-loss record as a pitcher, and make sure I have the right number of wins for the time of year. I also have to dial back his number of wins a little, to something that’s extraordinary but still believable. What I had was over the top for the modern baseball era.

Tonight I’ll start the read-through, but will mainly work on the baseball season consistency issues. I expect that to take most of the weekend, including marking whatever edits are needed. That I think my brain can handle, and save the other book until after the deposition.

The experts in the industry say you should stick to one genre, not spread yourself around several. That’s because your “fans”—one you have fans—will be expecting you to produce another book just like the one they already liked. I know I should do that, but in this case I’m glad I had something different to work on, and keep some production going during a difficult time.

A.C. Doyle – Starting Out

Arthur Conan Doyle didn’t figure on being a writer from the start. He studied to be a doctor. It was a different system in England in the 1870s and 1880s than it is in present day America. A doctor studied, a combination of class work and internship with a doctor in private practice. Eventually the young doc had to strike out on his own. Finding employment was not all that easy, not like it is today.

Doyle graduated his studies and had trouble finding work. He was writing stories for a couple of magazines, getting fairly good money for them, and sending most of it home to his mother. To try to make a little extra, he left a temporary job and took another—on a ship bound for Africa. Apparently ships at that time took a doctor along, to treat the passengers, and perhaps to treat those in African ports-of-call. He had been on a ship previously, and he would again.

However, this time the journey didn’t turn out as planned. He didn’t like Africa. He didn’t make the money he’d hoped for. A fire broke out on the return voyage and they almost had to abandon ship. He arrived in Liverpool in January 1882, and wrote this to his mother.

I don’t intend to go to africa again. The pay is less than I could make by my pen in the same time, and the climate is attrocious. The only inducement to go to sea is that you may make some fees out of passengers, but these boats have hardly any passengers—we had only one coming back. You can’t write at sea, either, and particularly you can’t write in the topics. If I can’t get a S. American boat, I will apply for a house surgeoncy I think. I want to improve myself in my profession and get more practical experience before I launch out for myself. I have written a couple of articles which will do, I think, and I have the germs of several in my head, which only need a literary atmosphere to make them hatch. [Arthur Conan Doyle: A Life In Letters, p. 147]

I see here a man who is torn between two worlds, two careers: medicine and writing. It turns out they are somewhat incompatible in that time and place. He has ideas for writing, and is producing some works, but can’t seem to make his money as a doctor and at the same time pursue writing as a sideline.

That seems to be the situation with many writers. A career in something else puts bread on the table, and writing happens in odd hours, stealing time away from something else that needs to be done. At some point we find a little success in writing, and the career seems old hat. Yet, the writing doesn’t support us, while the whatever career does.

So in A.C. Doyle’s circumstances at this point in his career, I find some inspiration and encouragement. Sure, he was a young man whereas I’m on the old side of middle age now. He had a long time ahead of him to write; I’ve got much less. But if I have to keep on doing civil engineering and corporate training therein for the next 5 years, 9 months, and 6 days, all the while carving out time to write, I guess that won’t be so bad.

Time to Back Off

Yesterday I had great plans for my evening. I was hoping to add between 1,000 and 1,500 words to In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People, as well as write several blog posts and do a little research reading.

However, yesterday was not the best day for work. I had a couple of hits against my ego and professional practices. They festered all day long, and even almost continuous rain couldn’t pull me out of my developing funk. After work I ate supper with my mother-in-law, got home by 7:00 PM and was in The Dungeon ready to work before 7:30 PM.

But I just didn’t feel like writing. Not anything. Not in the book, not blog posts. Nor did I feel like reading for research. I played a string of mindless computer games, read a few writing related blogs (and made a post on one), but got little done.

At some point I began working on TCSG, re-reading some recent additions, completing previously uncompleted thoughts, adding a little here, deleting some there, improving the wording in a few other spots. Eventually I began adding some new material to one chapter that was barely started. Throughout all this, I’d write for two minutes, read a blog for five, and play games for fifteen, then cycle back.

By the end of the evening I had just short of 600 words added. I was surprised at the amount. The total stands somewhere around 22,800 (I think; hard to remember after a sound sleep). The chapter I’m working on needs another thousand to be complete, but I’m not sure exactly what the direction I’m taking it in.

By the time this morning came around I came to a decision: I’ll back off writing for a little while and concentrate on other things, such as income taxes, filing, clean-up piles of stuff, etc. Perhaps by then I’ll have worked through some things, and will be better able to focus on the writing stuff. I’ll keep making blog posts, here and at An Arrow Through the Air. I might even work a little on editing In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. But TCSG is shelved for the moment.