Book Review: Winchester’s "The Life of John Wesley"

It might not make much sense to review a book that’s over 100 years old. It’s not as if my words will send people flocking to Barnes & Noble to buy it. Nor is anyone likely to be clamoring for it. But if it’s a book I’ve read, I feel as if I should review it.

The book is The Life of John Wesley by C.T. Winchester. My copy was published by The MacMillan Company in New York in 1906. I believe, from the copyright page, that it is a first edition, second printing book. I’m not sure where I got this book. Possibly at a thrift store or garage sale. Or maybe it was in some books given me for my son-in-law by a retired preacher. I let Richard take what he wanted the culled through the others, keeping some, adding some others to the garage sale pile. Either way, I love books, especially old books, and especially books by or about people like John Wesley.

At the time of the writing Wesley had been dead 114 years. His influence in the world had waned quite a bit. Methodism was still growing, but they weren’t exactly practicing it the way Wesley recommended. Already a number of biographies had been written, maybe five or six. Why another one? Well, aside from Emerson’s theory that each generation has to write for the next, adding to and somewhat replacing those of prior generations, Winchester said in his preference that early biographies were almost all done by Methodists, and so could be seen as biased. So Winchester wrote his.
It’s not a long book; 293 pages, decent size font and not large pages. In fact, it’s fairly short as a biography of a major religious reformer. I have not read the prior Wesley biographies, by the likes of Clarke, Watson, Moore, Southey, Stevens, Lelievre, Overton, and Telford (I guess that’s eight, not five or six). I’ve read one or two written much later, in the 1960s or 70s. So I don’t really know how Winchester’s treatment differs from those who went before or came behind him.
I just know this was a good read. It’s late enough in world history that the language is modern, the scholarship seems good, and Wesley’s place in history was well established. Winchester spends time discussing Wesley’s time, to demonstrate the impact he had: how awful social conditions were in Great Britain and Ireland when Wesley began his work, and how they changed as a result of it. I have heard it said that the impact Wesley had on English society—not just among the people called Methodists but on the Established Church and elsewhere—may well have saved England from a French style bloody revolution. I don’t know if that’s true, but it is true that Wesley changed England.

He wasn’t the preacher-evangelist Whitefiled was. He wasn’t the philosopher Johnson was. He wasn’t as deep a theologian as Calvin was. But he had a combination of abilities (I believe “skill set” is the new buzz word) that embraced all of these and more, that allowed him to build a religious movement. Winchester clearly demonstrates this.
I anticipate that, as I write my small group study on the life and works of John Wesley, that I’ll read more of those biographies. Anything before 1923 should be available on Google books, and I’ve got another one in hand I can read (or maybe re-read). Winchester’s will stand out, however, as the first one I read as research for my book.

My Winter Cold

Almost every year I have a summer cold and a winter cold. I thought maybe I would miss the 2010-2011 winter season, but unfortunately it’s here. It started as a tickle in my throat on Sunday. Normally my colds start in my head, not in my throat, so I was hoping it was nothing more than a sore throat. Not so, however. Last night the tickle was worse, and I woke up this morning barely able to speak. During the day it got better any time I didn’t have to speak, worse when I had to speak.

Now, tonight, it’s moved to my head as well. Stuffy nose, pressure behind the eyes, tired feeling. I’m sure it’s not flue; it feels like every one of my previous 50 or so colds, just that it went from throat to head instead of the other way.

So, I’m going to take it easy. I’ll cut back some on my computer time, meaning I’ll post here a little less frequently. But I will post as I get the chance.

A Bounty of Photographs

The last three days has brought me just that—a bounty of photographs. Old ones, family ones.

On Monday we received a package in the mail from Lynda’s cousin Robyn. She had been in touch with Lynda via Facebook and e-mail, saying she had some Cheney family photos passed down from her mom. Given that I function as the main family historian, she thought we should have it. Also included were some papers: a souvenir marriage certificate for their common grandparents, a deed, and some other things.

One of the photos is a view of the Cheney ranch, south of Fowler, Kansas. It shows men on horseback or on foot, women on horseback, and four children, probably boys, atop a shed; twelve people in all. You can see a number of outbuildings, including a large barn, a stone shed that is still standing, buildings that show in other photos, and I think the homestead house in the background. In the foreground are cattle in a barbwire corral.

I already have a copy of this, but it is only a photocopy of it. And, either on the original or on the first photocopy, someone wrote what each thing was and drew arrows all over the photo! Not smart. This one is clean, the top right of the photo being damaged, but it shows only sky and could probably be restored. Other photos include siblings, uncles, scenes. At least one other photo is one I’ve never seen before, and I’ve never had a real one of the ranch scene.

On Tuesday I received a phone call from my nephew, Chris. He was contacted by a man in England. That man had photos of our family (though I don’t think he’s related) that were in the possession of my grandfather’s oldest sibling, Mabel Todd. The photos sent so far are of the two brothers who came to America, and one wife (not my grandmother, though that’s supposedly coming. Actually, the one I’m calling a wife of the brother of my grandfather is not identified, but it’s by the same photographer who shot the brother, so it makes sense. I don’t know if more photos are coming or not, but I think so.

It’s amazing what’s out there for your family history is you only look. This contact from England was out of the blue. Chris wasn’t even researching Todd genealogy at the time, when up pops the e-mail: Hey, I’m in England, I’ve got pictures of your family; want them? That’s called a random act of genealogical kindness.

Now, when I issue the next edition of Seth Boynton Cheney: Mystery Man of the West, I’ll have a decent quality photo to include of the ranch scene, not that old one that was barely viewable. And if I ever write a book about the Todds, I’ll have a bit more to go on.

Now, someday, I hope to organize everything. I had an antique dresser that’s close to full of photos. Some are ones we took back in our constant picture taking days; some are accumulated Todd-Vick-Sexton family. In a couple of binds I have Cheney-Stephens family photos, also needed organization and better preservation. Oh how I need to get to all of that and not leave it to my children when I reach room temperature.

Calling All Beta Readers

Documenting America, Volume 1, is coming along very well. I’m up to 26,300 words, en route to somewhere between 35,000-40,000. I have 26 or 27 chapters, planning on about 32 all together, though I may have my word count in just 30.

Before I decided to do this as an e-book, I was preparing it to be newspaper columns. In fact, as I’ve mentioned before, the first four were published by our local newspaper as part of a guest editorial program. I received good, if limited feedback. I stopped submitting them when the editor in charge of the program left, even though the program continued. I kept writing them for a while, accumulating eighteen separate columns, though a couple of them probably weren’t really done. When it was a newspaper column, I aimed to have 500-750 words.

Now that I’m doing it as an e-book, I have no restriction on word count. What was an individual column is now a chapter. The only limit is how many words I would consider to be “history in sound-bite sized chunks.” I consider that between 1000 to 1250 words. So I’m expanding those eighteen chapters to full length, as well as adding columns. I think I have seven or eight more to expand. I found, as I worked through many documents, that they deserved multiple columns/now chapters. I thought I’d do them widely separated, then decided to do them in pairs. So I’m adding chapters within the eighteen already written as well as at the end.

It’s time, I think, to get this in the hands of some beta readers. I’ve contacted some by e-mail, receiving positive responses, but I need a couple of more people. A beta reader could be another writer, or an industry pro who has a critical eye. Or, they could come from the target audience, the people I hope to sell books to. The things I’m interested in are:

  1. Is this a sound concept, i.e. the idea of breaking USA history down into small segments as the chapters do?
  2. Is it likely to have commercial success, i.e. would you want to buy something like this?
  3. Is the writing any good? I have a very thick skin. If someone says my writing is crap, I take that as useful criticism and attempt to do better.
  4. Does the chapter complete a thought, or is the reader left hanging wondering “why the heck did he bother to write that?”
  5. Any of what we call “in-line” comments are appreciated from a beta reader, but certainly not expected. This could be anything from: identifying grammar errors; catching typos; pointing out some bad writing in the midst of otherwise good writing; pointing out incomplete thoughts, where I might have meant to say something more, was interrupted while writing, then never came back to it.

So, if anyone has any desire to be a beta reader for this project, let me know by posting a comment, or e-mailing me at norman_d_gutter at yahoo dot com.

My e-Short Story is for Sale on Amazon

Yes, it’s finally up. Here’s the screen shot. See the third listing.

 

 

 

Saturday I created the e-“book”. That took more steps than I expected, but with the on-line helps from Kindle, it went well. Yesterday I uploaded it. At that point Amazon said it was going through an approval process, which I guess is to make sure it isn’t an objectionable product, and that would take 24 hours. At 5 PM today Amazon said it was approved, and that it would be available for sale within 24 hours. It was up in less than 4.

 

 

Now it’s time to get a little buzz going, as I said. First I think I’ll head over to Suite101.com. When the good writers there assessed two covers, several expressed interest in reading it. Maybe I’ll be able to get a couple of sales. Then maybe I’ll go to Facebook and make an announcement on my wall. Perhaps a few friends will buy it there. The, I might make my first appearance on the Kindle forums, and see what I can drum up there.

 

 

As I said the other day, it’s a new era.

 

 

Gotta go write.

That Was Painless

Well, I did it. I created an e-book (okay, it’s just a short story, but the process is the same) and uploaded it to the Kindle store. Don’t go looking for it; Amazon says it may take up to 24 hours for it to appear on the store. Sometime soon, “Mom’s Letter” should appear.

This is an experiment. I checked the e-book out and it seemed to format okay. It looks better with font size 2, since the lines of the embedded poem run to their full length. I priced it at $0.99, the minimum Kindle allows. The royalty is 35%, so for each one that sells I’ll get almost 35 cents.

There were a lot of steps in this. Of course, part of that was the setting up of my account and entering all that information. I won’t need to do that again. Part of it was being uncertain of what I was doing, and so having to read various instructions, some of them twice. One thing that concerns me is the cover may be a bit smaller than they recommend. I think they wanted 1280 pixels mimimum on the longest side. I read that as maximum, and the pic has only 1187 pixels on the long side. Since I don’t know much about digital photos, I wasn’t sure how to change that.

I still have to set up my author page. I’ll do that after supper. I hope that won’t be too lengthy, because I had hoped to work on expanding a couple of chapters of Documenting America. Maybe I won’t be able to get to that tonight, but we’ll see.

A new era has dawned in my life. Let’s see what happens.

Time to Get a Buzz On

When you’re talking about e-self-publishing (eSP), “getting a buzz on” means something completely different than it did when I was in college in the 1970s. It means creating an interest in what’s being published; drumming up publicity; making people salivate in anticipating of your writing. For a major book launch, publishers and authors might begin getting the buzz on six to twelve months before publishing date.

In the old days writers went on book tours. Wait, they still do that and this isn’t the old days, it’s right now. I should say in the old way of publishing, with print on paper, writers went on book tours. They held readings. They did signings. They spoke to civic clubs. They talked to newspapers, radio, and, if fortunate enough, to television. They had a book in their hands, and copies to sell.

Now, with “Mom’s Letter”, all I’m going to have are pixels on a screen, organized into words and paragraphs, not even pages. A reading is out of the question, because I’d read the whole thing and then who’d want to buy it? And book signings at a bookstore are out, because, well, it’s not for sale at the bookstore, and Amazon.com has no brick and mortar stores.

So creating a buzz for the short story will be difficult, but I’ve already started. When I asked my fellow writers at Suite101.com to comment on the two covers I was considering, several expressed interest in buying the short story. The woman here at work that I shared it with on Tuesday, before the storm, read it during the storm, and today she told me she loved it. I think she would write a 5-star review on Amazon. One Suite101 writer is putting together an e-literary magazine, and is looking to do book reviews on it. I’ll be e-mailing him today. As he has no subscribers, but will be selling the mag via Kindle, I don’t know how much buzz that will be, if he even decides to include me in his reviews section.

Then there’s this blog, which has 10 subscribers and about 4 other regular readers, plus drop-bys. If I can convince them to say something about it on their blogs, that would be a few more potential buyers. There’s always Facebook, with my 90 or so friends. If some of them would buy it and read it and post something about it on their FB page, with their hundreds or thousands of friends, maybe that will be a little bit of buzz. My son says I need to join Twitter and begin tweeting to gain publicity. Maybe. I’ll give it some thought.

Also, I can become a little bit active again at Absolute Write, put a link in my signature there, and see what that will do. I will need to add a link to a blogger signature as well. I can also contact local media via press releases and see if I can get a notice there. That seems like overkill, however.

So there’s no shortage of things I can do to promote the book, and I’ll probably do most of them. But the good news is, beyond this I don’t really have to do anything. If it gets a buzz on and begins to sell, great. If it doesn’t, no biggy. If I keep submitting the short story to literary quarterlies and finally get accepted, I could expect a payment between $10 and $50. Actually, the more likely scenario is it would be accepted by one of those literary mags that offers no payment except two contributor’s copies. The holy grail of publishing is to get $1.00 dollar a word, which would be about $1850. To reach that I’d have to sell 5,340 e-copies. To reach $50 I’d have to sell 145; to reach $10 only 29 copies. I think I’ll wind up somewhere between 29 and 5340 (if I’m not being delusional), so already I’m thinking the short story launch is successful, buzz or no buzz.

We’ll see what happens. E-self-publishing “Mom’s Letter” is an experiment. The minimum price Amazon allows is $0.99, with the royalty being 35%. Some have said that’s too high a price for a short story when you have novels on the Kindle platform selling for $0.99. But I feel that as long as I accurately say what the buyer can expect for his or her 99 cents, I’m not cheating anyone. I’m excited. This is the start of an adventure. As with most adventures the outcome is not clear. Let the journey commence, sometime in the next three days, I hope.

The Jury is IN on the Short Story Covers

Home again today. I could have made it to work, but a call to the office determined that I could stay home if I wanted. My pick-up is all cleaned off and dug out, ready to hit the plowed roads at 6:30 AM tomorrow. So I’ve had a pleasant day of exercising my body via shoveling, and my brain via reading and writing. I wrote one new chapter of Documenting America, and expanded one old one to full length. I also did some research for future chapters. The word count now stands at 23,300, so I’m edging close to done. I’ve done half of my daily Wesley research, read the couple of writing blogs I follow, followed stocks for a while. I’m ready for something else. Oh, yes, I’ve also begun research for my next Suite101 article.

A few days ago I posted two trial covers for my short story, “Mom’s Letter”, asking people to weigh in on which one looked better. I also posted a notice about this at the writer’s forums at Suite101. Not may people commented on the blog (only one, in fact), but many of my friend and colleagues from Suite101 dropped by, looked at the two, then went back to the Suite forums and posted comments. I also received comments from my wife and son. The verdict is…

…both covers are good (one Suite woman described both as “gorgeous”), but cover one was better than cover two. The comments were about 14:1 in favor of cover one. The only negatives about cover one concerned the font. Some thought the letters in the word “Mom’s” and my name seemed “squooshed” together. Some saw the font as “non-professional”. I must confess that I didn’t see the squooshing, and still don’t after the comments. When I first looked at the font it did look non-professional to me. However, after dwelling on it a bit, I think it’s the right font for the story. It looks like it came off a typewriter—an old typewriter—which fits the story with it’s span of forty years and attention to memories.

I was going to re-shoot the second one, see if I could do better with the lighting, but have changed my mind. With such a large margin between the two, it’s doubtful that better lighting on two will overturn the verdict in favor of one. Perhaps the cover designer might want to tweak the letter spacing, perhaps not. I’m pleased with it the way it is. All it needs, IMHO, is the words “a short story” added somewhere, so that potential buyers are not led astray, and it’s good to go.

One of my Suite commenters said she’d been in many editorial meetings where covers were discussed and had never seen such a lopsided agreement between competing covers. That may be due to the fact that the photographer for one is accomplished in that pursuit, while the photographer for two (meaning me) is not, and has no sense of artistic layout, lighting, spacing, etc.

The good thing is, with e-self-publishing, it’s easy to change the cover. Short story not selling? Early reviews say the cover stinks? Change it. If that doesn’t work change it again. If that doesn’t work change it again. Change it daily if you want. It’s not a question of pulling a print run; it’s a question of deleting a file and uploading a new one. How cool is that.

So, I’m inching closer to publishing this. Maybe I can get it done by the weekend. My schedule will require me to wait until early March if I don’t get it done by then. Must next see if the story needs any tweaking. Amazingly, I found one typo in it on Tuesday, and a “that” I think I can delete. Recent beta readers have suggested a tweak or two, which I’ll evaluate. Then, I have to finish research into how to upload the file and list it on Kindle. Then I’ll have to see about other publishing platforms. Nice, discrete tasks all in a row.

Another Snow Day, a Little Bit of Progress

The forecast was for 4 to 10 inches, then 4-9, then 4-8. Last night at 11 PM the storm was hanging out just north of us, and I wondered if it would pass by to the north. I set the alarm to get up at the normal time, in case the forecasters had it wrong. I was up at 3:45 AM and looked out. 1-2 inches had fallen; the snowfall right then was heavy. I turned off the alarm and went back to bed.
When I got up at 7:30 AM, we already had 7-8 inches, and the snow was still falling. I had my devotions, then went downstairs to lok at stocks on an unusual day at home. By the time the snow ended, around noon, we had 12 inches, maybe a little more than that.
On such a day as this I should write. And I did. I finished edits to my article for Safe Highway Matters, after calling the Michigan Department of Transportation to get additional info and quotes. I then wrapped up a Suite101 genealogy article. However, when I tried to upload it I was foiled by my old, old computer. The hard drive had been crunching forever, and it kept doing it and didn’t load the article publishing page at Suite. I gave up, went upstairs, then out to shovel the driveway. That took an hour, then back in for some soup and back downstairs. I decided to do a files cleaning of the computer. I figured at the same time I’d install updates and re-boot. This took forever.
So I came over to Lynda’s computer (which she almost never uses), much newer than mine and more powerful, and I began this post. Meanwhile the old computer finished all its crunching and deleting and uploading and restarting. I’ve been going back and forth between the two, typing on this post and starting Suite101 again and getting the article uploaded. That finally worked.
Meanwhile, as I’ve had to wait on web page loading, I’ve been able to do some research for Documenting America. I also began putting together my next brown bag presentation at work, this concerning floodplains.
It’s now 4:16 PM as I write this. Hours and hours remain in the day. I’ll spend a little more time on the floodplain presentation prep, then finish reading the document for my next DA chapter, then maybe go upstairs and read some in the John Wesley biography I’m most of the way through and enjoying immensely.
Another snow day is a productive day, perhaps helping me to see a little more what a writing life would be like. Now if I could just get these fool pictures to place correctly in my blog, I’ll be happy.

A Short Story is Only as Good as its Cover

Okay, readers, I need some opinions. My good friend Gary Boden has prepared two trial covers for my short story, “Mom’s Letter”. I know, some will think “A short story needs a cover?” When you list it on Amazon.com, it does. The cover conveys an impression to a buyer, and either draws them in or turns them away. It could be a neutral thing, but you want it to be a positive.

Gary took a photo, I took a photo, and he composed them into covers. The first one was before he knew the words “short story” needed to be on it. We’ll get that fixed; easy enough.

I know nothing about art and what’s attractive or what isn’t. I’d like to know what other people think. Which looks better? Which one would make you more likely to spend 99 cents to buy the short story? And, if you want to take the time, why?

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