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Checking In

I haven’t posted on this blog for a while. Some extra busyness with non-writing things was one cause. Then there was the four-day trip to Oklahoma City to help babysit our two grandsons. Now it’s a cold that is trying to decide if it’s going to be mild, and hence is about over, or if it’s going to deepen, in which case the worst is yet to come.

I’m at work, muddling through, but quite inefficient. Leaving at 1:30 p.m., and will chalk up a half day of sick time.

I’m make a brief report. Since my last post, on October 24, I have been working on China Tour. I’m into the third chapter, 5,100+ words completed. I had been thinking this book would be 75,000-90,000 words, but it seems to be running short to me. I’m in the middle of what I consider the first key scene, when the tourist couple are mistaken for the CIA agents “couple” and thus botch the information exchange critical to the CIA operation. The agents have figured it out, and are just beginning their conversation with Chinese intelligence supervisor to figure out what to do.

This also takes me close to the end of the planning I’ve done. I have the denouement fairly well in mind, and one or two key scenes near the end. But except for the scene where the tourist couple meet the agent couple, the vast middle part of the novel is a blank page to me. Something better come to me, or my writing of it will grind to a halt real quickly.

Looks like it’s probably “China Tour”

I don’t recommend anyone go about their book writing they way I have for the last twelve days. As I reported in a previous post, because I felt no sense of direction of where to go next with my writing. I could write any one of three novels or one non-fiction book. So I decided to write the first chapter in each and see how the work flowed, how it felt to me during the writing, and choose based on the experience.

First up was Headshots, the sequel to In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. I labored over a Friday-Sunday period, barely getting about 1950 words and the chapter done. I found that picking up the threads of all the people who were involved in the end of FTSP was tedious. In fact, after finishing the chapter I realized I didn’t have all the threads covered: missed one I need to add in.

Next was Preserve The Revelation, the sequel to Doctor Luke’s Assistant. This went better. I did a little work on Augustus ben Adam’s family tree and children before I started the writing, to make sure he could have two sons of the ages I wanted at the time I wanted them. It all worked fine. Then I wrote the chapter in two evenings. Though I had thought much about it over a few years, it still took me in a different direction as I wrote it. The needed scenes for the second chapter ran through my head as I concluded the first, which is a good thing.

Next was China Tour, a sequel to nothing. In fact, it will be a stand-alone novel. This has run through my mind many, many times over the years. I found our trip diary from 1983, read through some of it (the Hong Kong days), and jumped in to the writing. In two evenings I had my 1,500 word first chapter. It went fairly easy; but then I’ve run that chapter over in my mind many times, and had recently explained the book in detail to a colleague.

Then, to this mix I added another volume of Documenting America. This would be a Civil War edition, in recognition that we are now 150 years away from that event, with somewhat heightened interest in the reading public. Unfortunately, I found this heavy going. I enjoyed the research, but the writing went much, much harder than I wanted. This would be the shortest of the four books, and I would certainly enjoy the research, but I think the writing would be most labored.

Based on ease of writing and flow of words, it looks as if China Tour should get the nod to be my next book. Given that, last night I decided to give the second chapter a try, and in two hours knocked out the entire chapter, about 1,050 words. The problem is, this book makes no sense to be the next one. It’s not a sequel to anything, nor is it in a series or will it ever have a sequel. It might not be all that long (I’m thinking 70,000-75,000 words), though for all I know it could run longer.

One of the sequels makes more sense. Those 92 people who bought Doctor Luke’s Assistant, or the 5,000 people who downloaded it for free, might just come looking for something similar. Headshots makes more sense because I most recently wrote FTSP, so the characters are all known commodities and fresh in my mind. I’ve thought though what will happen in considerable detail. The problem? With 3 total sales of FTSP, it’s not like the public is clamoring for this book.

I haven’t committed yet, but it is probable that China Tour will be next. I know at least one of my reader/writer friends who will be happy.

Writing Progress

Or lack thereof. As I reported before on this blog, I wrote the first chapter in three different novels, trying to see which inspired me most, and which didn’t inspire me at all, or at least not much. In this way I could perhaps determine which one to work on next, given that none stood out to me before actually writing.

I did that beginning last weekend (that is, Oct 12-14) and during the next week. It was last Wednesday, I think, that I finished the third of the first chapters. Thursday I did little more than re-read and maybe tweak one of them a little. Or, I could be off by a day. It may have been Thursday that I finished the last of the first chapters. One thing I did this time was to start a writing diary for each of these, so I have the exact dates recorded. Alas, the diaries are home and I’m at work as I type this.

Friday I decided to write the first chapter on one more book. I have always intended to write additional volumes of Documenting America. It’s been set aside for more than a year as I wrote other things, but that was always my intent. Given that it is, right now, the sesquicentennial of the Civil War, I thought that would be the best next volume to do.

I had also figured out where to start on that volume: with a speech before the US Senate in 1850 by John C. Calhoun, staunch defender of slavery. After that I would move forward nine or ten years, into the immediate lead up to the war and then the war years themselves.

So Friday I dusted off some old notes, grabbed the right volume of The Annals of America, and read the speech, which is actually a long excerpt in that book. Then I went on-line and found the complete speech, and read most of the parts left out in the Annals. This took all Friday evening, a shortened evening as I had a few other things to do as well as writing.

So Saturday, after my normal Saturday routine (which included cutting down a small, dead tree and cutting it to firewood lengths, as well as a good walk), I went to work on the chapter. And I didn’t get it finished. I worked on it for over three hours, finding concentration impossible. I managed to get together a long excerpt from the book (about 1250 words), which is longer than I used in the first volume. But writing my commentary on it was most difficult. By the end of those three hours, after shifting back and forth from the chapter to rereading parts of the speech to wasting time because I couldn’t concentrate, I think I had only 500 words of commentary done, short of a full chapter.

It didn’t help that I was feeling poorly. I’m not sure if it was something I ate, or having done too much strenuous exercise earlier in the day, but I didn’t feel good all Saturday afternoon and evening. When you body isn’t well, it’s tough to ge the mind in gear.

So where does this leave me? I can safely say that the time is not right for me to work on Documenting America: The Civil War Edition. Of the three novels, the one that seemed to flow best to the page was China Tour, the one that was most difficult was Headshots. Preserve The Revelation flowed fairly well.

What I think I will do is take a few more days to think about it. I have a lot of non-writing things that have piled up over the last few weeks, things like my budget spreadsheet, filing, and some cleaning. It’s those things that a married bachelor takes time to get to when his wife is away helping with the grandkids. Then Thursday I head to Oklahoma City to help said wife with said grandkids, returning next Sunday. So I don’t think I’ll do much writing till then. Although, tonight and tomorrow, if I have a spare hour, I might try my hand at chapter 2 in one of them.

Dean Wesley Smith’s Advice about Blogging

Dean Wesley Smith has been a writer for over thirty years. He has written a large number of short stories, some novels, and was a writers of Star Wars novels. His wife is also a respected writer.

Smith has a blog in which he gives advice to us in the writing trenches, trying to figure out how to break in. He’s a fan of self-publishing, but does not say you should never pursue trade publishing. He tends to realize that everyone’s circumstance is different, and both publishing directions are valid pursuits.

In a recent blog post about promoting our publications, he had this to say.

DO NOT blog about writing or your writing process. No real book buyer cares. If you must blog, write about the content of your books. If you are doing books with cooking, blog about cooking. And so on. Otherwise, don’t blog. Again a huge waste of time.

So, what he’s saying is that this blog of mine is a waste of my time. Because I have made this blog about my writing process. What am I thinking about writing next? How’s my work-in-progress going? How my sales of published works? My thought was that at some point I would have hoards of adoring fans who would want to know all about that. Well, maybe not hoards, but some number who would be interested.

According to Smith, no one is interested in that information. They might be interested in my books and stories, but not in me. Deflating to think about, but probably true. Probably all of these posts about my writing work, decision-making, and progress is not winning me any readers.

I will think about this. What is or are the right topic(s) to blog about? If it should be about the topic of my books, I have a dilemma in that my topics are scattered across several subjects. I would need multiple blogs to cover them. But Kristen Lamb says don’t have multiple blog. Have one blog and cover all your topics in that. I don’t know, but it seems that a post about the current World Series would not appeal to the same people as one about early church history.

Of course, that confirms the advice of other writing pros: Don’t write across genres, because those who read one won’t read another and you won’t have readers reading all your books. Or, stated another way, you will have to develop a separate audience for each new genre or major topic.

Alas, the course I’ve taken. Will it kill me from work and worry?

New book started; progress slow

As I reported on Friday, I had hoped to write 5,000 words this weekend just passed. My wife left for Oklahoma City on Friday, leaving me a quiet house and not too much to do. Friday night I arrived home late after eating supper with my mother-in-law. There was still plenty of evening left, and I should have gotten a lot done. Alas, I created folders and files for my three potential new works, and wrote one scene in one of them. Tiredness set it, and I quit for the evening.

Saturday found me in my normal routine. I read in the Bible first thing, then ate a small breakfast, then read some in my current reading book. Then I went outside to do chores, which that day was cutting down a dead tree (only 5″ caliper) and cutting it into firewood length. It was almost too much for this old man, but I got it done. Back inside the house I did some cleaning

That tuckered me out enough that I fell asleep in my reading chair after lunch. I don’t think I slept long: about two touchdowns’ worth in whatever game I had on. Still, I was down in The Dungeon and at my computer by 3:00 p.m. Plenty of time to get a couple of thousand words written.

Alas, I only wrote around 900, taking Headshots up to 1240. I couldn’t concentrate, and kept shelling out to play mindless computer games. I began to write something, wrote ten words in a new scene, and couldn’t think of what to write next. Or, I think more accurately, didn’t want to apply my mind to the scene. So I played games for a half hour, then came back to the scene and wrote it.

Over and over that repeated Saturday, and actually Sunday. By the time I quit at 10:30 p.m. on Sunday I had around 1,430 words written. Well, more than that, I suppose, if you include the two blog posts I wrote for An Arrow Through The Air, my other blog, one which I posted yesterday and one which I scheduled to post tomorrow. That’s another 600 words I guess, bring the total for the three days to 2,000. That’s not bad, but it’s a far cry from the 5,000 I was hoping for.

As I said in a previous post, I’m not sure which novel to work on next, and my plan is to write 1,000 words in each of the three and see which one seems best to me to continue in. I did that in only one, so two to go. Tonight, I’ll be home at a good time. I’ll have to cook supper (stir fry, I think), and do some significant cleaning in the kitchen. That should put me in The Dungeon around 8:00 p.m., giving me time to write the thousand words. I’m thinking of doing so in China Tour, though by the time I get home I may change my mind and go with Preserve The Revelation.

I sure wish I felt some direction in all of this. Possibly the difficulty I had applying myself to Headshots is a form of negative direction. If so, that’s a start.

Hoping for a productive weekend

I just did something that may seem stupid, but I created folders and writing diaries on my computer for three novels: Headshots, Preserve The Revelation, and China Tour. My reason for doing this was overcoming the blank sheet of paper syndrome.

In the past I’ve noticed that the blank sheet of paper is a real hindrance to getting started on the project. At work, one of my responsibilities is writing new construction guide specifications: for new materials, new equipment, new construction methods, etc. I’ve noticed that getting started with the next spec section was a problem. So I created a file, called TYPSPEC, which has all the paragraph headings I might need. That way I always have a start to the new spec. I bring up that file, change the name and save it in a new location, and begin writing. I did that to a new spec section today, and made good progress.

So now I have three novels started, or almost started. My plans are to write 1,000 words in two of them, or maybe in all three, and see what feels right.

Okay, I’m back to this. I just opened a new document and wrote the first scene of Headshots. Three hundred fifty-five words. It’s a start. Tomorrow and Sunday I hope to write a minimum of 5,000 words on something, at least 1,000 of them in a different work. We’ll see how it goes.

Waiting on Direction for Next Book

I’m between books, as I said before. I have three or four ways to go. I could write the sequel to In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People. I could write the next church history book as a follow-up to Doctor Luke’s Assistant. I could move on to my my novel on China, tentatively titled China Tour. Another direction to move in is more articles for Decoded Science. And, I’m not limited to fiction. I have ideas for the next volume of Documenting America. What to do?

On her blog, author and social media expert Kristen Lamb is doing a series on novel writing. In a post this week she talked about “log lines,” by which she means a one sentence summary of the novel. She gave some ideas of the pieces that should be in the log line, what makes it good or not so good.

This got me to thinking, maybe writing log lines for all my fiction could help me sense some direction on what to do next. Here’s what I came up with.

Already published:
The Mafia tries to prevent a phenom pitcher fresh off the Kansas prairies from leading the Cubs to a World Series victory.
In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People

A normal housewife suspected of being a rogue CIA agent who helps a terrorist escape.
“Whiskey, Zebra, Tango”

Luke must overcome opposition of the Jews and Romans, and the errors of a bumbling assistant, to write a massive biography of Jesus.
Doctor Luke’s Assistant

Possible new fiction:
Ronny Thompson juggles rehabilitation from injury, pitching for the Cubs, helping his farm family, and protecting his love from two rival Mafia Families who want her dead.
Headshots, sequel to In Front of Fifty Thousand Screaming People

An American tourist family becomes embroiled in a CIA extraction operation in 1980s China.
China Tour

Augustus of Caesarea and his son must see the original manuscript of the Revelation safely back to Israel.
Preserve The Revelation, sequel to Doctor Luke’s Assistant

Any thoughts?

Closing in on “The Gutter Chronicles”

I was out of town from Sept 27 through Oct 3, attending one day of the WEFTEC 12 conference in New Orleans, where I chaired a panel discussion on erosion and sediment control regulations. Lynda and I drove, and we wrapped a couple of vacation days on either side of the conference day. This was first time to N.O. for both of us. Except for rain every day but the last, and our first hotel reservations were not valid. Except for that, everything was fine. We enjoyed the trip.

I had great plans to read and work on writing in off hours. Due to the rain we had a lot of off hours, but I didn’t do much either. I had with me two books (three including my Bible): one a book of letters from a French immigrant farmer to America in the 1700s; the other The Nature of the Book, which looks at how printed books had an impact on science through the 1600s and 1700s. I read one page in the letters book and laid it aside, deciding this would be for another time. I had started the Book book a couple of months ago, but found it so densely written that I knew I would need maximum powers of concentration to get through it. I managed to read about thirty pages of it during the trip, and feel good about that.

As for writing, I had in mind to work on drafts of my next articles for Decoded Science, but found that required more concentration than a road trip would allow. I also had with me a print out of The Gutter Chronicles. I had previously edited the first five chapters, and thought I could do several more. I didn’t even pull it out until the last night, when we stopped for the night to break up  the drive home.

I managed to get through the next five chapters that evening. These were all written several years ago. I hope I’ve grown as a writer during that time, and that’s the reason I found a number of areas for improvement. One item I added to the book in recent time is Norman Gutter describing the origin of the name Gutter. He says something different every time someone asks him “So what kind of a name is Gutter?” The name stories come from some fun we had with the name Norman D Gutter eight or nine years ago at the now defunct Poem Kingdom. I saved those names stories out to a MS Word file, and they are proving useful now.

Today, during my noon hour, I’ll type those edits. This weekend I’ll read and edit the last five chapters. Actually, I think I’ll print the first ten chapters again, and maybe I’ll read them and see if I have any more edits to do.

I hope to have all edits typed next Monday, and publish it by next Thursday. For the cover I’m just going to take a photograph of some scene in my office. Maybe it will be a close-up of my computer screen with the title page for TGC on it, some of the adjacent areas showing around it. That may not be the world’s greatest cover, but it’s what I’m going to do.

I don’t have any great hopes for TGC. It’s sort of a throwaway. I wrote most of it years ago, intending it only for the enjoyment of the people in our firm. However, it’s easy to bundle it into a fifteen chapter novela and publish it, so why not? If I keep writing these, as some people in the firm want me to, maybe some day I’ll have Volume 2, another fifteen chapters, and even later Volume 3. From 38 years in the business, I’ve got a lot of stories to record.

In Volume 2, if I really do write it, Norman will meet his love interest (I finally decided on her name today) and will have his run-in with lawyers. I’m actually kind of anxious to get started on it.

“Whiskey, Zebra, Tango” published

My cousin’s wife, Linda Roberts Hill, sent me two options on the final cover early yesterday evening. I arrived home from the Centerton Planning Commission meeting and there they were. I ate a hasty supper, and went to The Dungeon to do the final publishing tasks.

I had already uploaded the publication file to Amazon’s KDP platform, but hadn’t published while waiting on the cover. However, I realized I had left some things out of it. So I corrected those, added the cover, and published. Unfortunately the KDP website was a little balky, and it took three attempts to upload it. I finally did, and that put it in the review queue.

So I hopped over to Smashwords, created the same book for it except with Smashwords references, and uploaded it. Smashwords was a little balky last night as well, but it eventually went through, and went live right away, there having been no auto-vettor errors. Within an hour I had an e-mail saying there had been a sale.

By the time I got to work this morning, it was live at Amazon.

So, my eighth publication is now available for sale at Amazon and at Smashwords. At some point it will enter the Smashwords Premium catalog, which means it will be available at the iTunes and Barnes and Noble stores.

Completed “The Gutter Chronicles”

Yes, yesterday I finished The Gutter Chronicles, my novella throwing fun at my own profession, civil engineering, and the land development industry in general. Maybe I should say I finished Volume 1 of TGC. I hope to keep writing these, as the spirit moves me, and as situations come up in the workplace that demand being incorporated into TGC.

So now it’s on to the editing. I wrote the first ten chapters of this back in 2006, I think. It may have been a couple of years earlier, maybe even as early as 2002. My intent was to simply add a little humor to our office environment. I gave them to two or three people, who widely distributed them in the office. Feedback to the first couple of chapters was positive, so I kept going. Along the way I added some poems written by the protagonist, Norman D. Gutter.

By sometime around 2004 to 2006, I had nine chapters written. At that point I took a break. About a year later I wrote chapter 10 and started chapter 11. It was earlier this year that I finished chapter 11. At the same time I began distributing them to some people in the office, as a whole new crop of CEI employees should know about what’s going on at I.C.E. engineering and how the young Norman Gutter gets along during his first year with the firm.

Ideas began to come to me for more chapters: a love interest for Norman, dealing with a construction contractor, being dragged into a frivolous lawsuit, office relocations, rapid expansion followed by corporate downsizing. I could see many more chapters in my mind. In the last month and a half I completed four more, bringing me to fifteen.

I decided that was a good number for a novella. The fifteen I have in hand comprise about 32,000 words, which is novella length. That’s too short for a print book, but a good size for an e-book. So I decided to do that: make it an e-book and go ahead and publish it on Amazon and Smashwords. It may be of no interest to anyone except CEI employees, or it have a slightly wider interest in the civil engineering and land development communities.

One problem I’ll have with the editing is the time gap in the writing. For all I know some of the things I’ve put in this chapter are in earlier chapters. That’s my main challenge right now: to make sure it flows properly and reads as a consistent manuscript from beginning to end.

I’m not starting out by calling this volume 1, though maybe I should. I’m pretty sure there will be at least one more volume, and I probably have enough material to get three or four volumes without trying to hard. I’ll keep the option open to add “Volume 1” before publishing.

This will be interesting.